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Whom Would I Listen To

Sometimes when am emotionally strangled I sit in the corner of my room and think and blink, also cry untill my eyes run out of tears.. When I am hurt for any reason.. My.. Mind blabbers: "May be I shouldn't have attained birth" Specifically ~"Not as a girl" Why me?!!! If only I could be a boy ~ Would be physically strong, could go out anytime without fear, absolute freedom, no security required, no restrictions, no molestation, no labour pains.. sobs .. Occupying the pause.. My.. Heart consoles: Stop my dear Throw away the fear Freeze the tear And glow like a fire Face the obstacles being bold I know you are strong Being female you can bear a life within you unlike a male. Most of all .. Gender doesn't seem to be an issue..whence there's strong willpower and confidence in you..!!! Words are too short to describe your abilities, talents and skills. So you are empowered & independent.Be Stable. Otherwise, I might explode. Hearing those last words I quickly grab my pillow embrace it tight unlock my might close my sight and imagine myself in a graveyard I tremble ...oops, That is not the place am supposed to be at mid-twenties.. I have just begun my life There's lot more to explore Long way to go.I sigh.. Placing my hand on my heart listening to the loud thumps Promised it saying.. I wouldn't give up nor break down for any reason hereafter...!!! "Be you" Never copy and transform into him or her!! Be grateful to lord who has created You for a purpose. Listen to your heart at the time of conflict; It comforts you to handle situations with ease. 3-8-2020 Second place in the contest. Note:If only,may be ,sometimes Poetry Contest. Sponsored by Silent One.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/9/2020 10:03:00 AM

This is your journey, Deepa, powerfully expressed. Good advice for all of us who journey through the process of accepting our gifts and giftedness to become the individuals God has made us to be! Thank you for sharing your journey. Congratulations on your win. Always in my prayers.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/7/2020 10:48:00 PM

I am completely in awe of your journey. You emerge as a brave strong woman Deepa. Always remember you shine through the flowing emotiins in your heart and they are blissful sprinkles on a turbulent journey. Congratulations on your win. A fave for me :) Much love!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2020 11:21:00 AM

- A heart that loves, lights up a large area and nourishes all growth ... always be yourself, Deepa :) - Congratulations on your win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

V. Deepa
Date: 8/6/2020 1:18:00 PM

Thankyou Anne mam for your cheering words.The words which you uttered are the exact meaning of my name..!!:-)I light up the life of people around me with my love:-) Sure.Let's be ourselves and enjoy. Take care.Much love:-)

Silent One

Date: 8/5/2020 8:03:00 AM

I could feel your emotions pouring through your pen in this one, Life is full of trials and tribulations, but we need to remain strong as all pain is temporary.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

V. Deepa
Date: 8/6/2020 1:14:00 PM

Thankyou very much for your kind appreciation and encouragement like always.Yes, I agree to your positive words.Life is full of trials..Let's remain strong..!!Take care. Keep inspiring.Warmest regards ~Deepa:-)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 8/4/2020 2:27:00 AM

What an incredible, heartwrenching write dear Deepa. You are an amazing poet so remember that when you are doubting yourself and always be your lovely self my friend. This is a wonderful poem and it should be at the top ~ a FAVE for me ~ thank you... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

V. Deepa
Date: 8/4/2020 6:13:00 AM

Wow, dear Ann mam.. Thankyou..!! You made my day with your lovely warm words of encouragement and soulful appreciation. Sure ,I love myself very much more than anyone.:-)You are a great poetess too.Keep inspiring us with your golden words.:-) Glad that you loved my poem. Thanks a bunch for the Fave too. Have a bright day.Much love:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/3/2020 5:47:00 AM

Hello Deepa, when you are feeling low in your mood, take the time to read this poem you have created. Enjoy your day my friend. Much love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2020 9:40:00 AM

Hello Deepa, yes I am doing well, thank you. This poem should help you when you feel sad. Much love, Darlene

V. Deepa
Date: 8/3/2020 10:59:00 AM

Hello Darlene mam, Sure, thanks a lot for always cheering me up.:-) Offcourse I will read this poem. Have a wonderful day..:-) I believe your doing well!?! Take care.Much love:-)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/3/2020 4:38:00 AM

Amen. Powerful penning, my heart wrenched, then fluffed and comforted. I expect to see this at the top of the winners list <3 xomo!

V. Deepa
Date: 8/3/2020 10:57:00 AM

Amen.Thankyou Mo mam for your lovely wishes and appreciations:-) Sad that I made your heart wrench today..But glad that it fluffed up again and felt comforted.:-):-) Have a blessed day.Much love:-)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/3/2020 2:28:00 AM

Thought provoking words Deepa, with a clear message, be yourself always, trying to be like others makes you vain and bitter. Well written and good luck in the contest. Tom

V. Deepa
Date: 8/3/2020 10:54:00 AM

Thankyou Tom sir for your kind words of encouragement and appreciation always.:-) Yes, your right.We need to be ourselves. :-) Have a lovely day.Warm regards sent to you:-)