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Who You Calling Past It

It’s heavier now, it’s darker now. The people we were got lost somewhere in the mileage somehow. The rain looks the same but the cold delivers more. You get to know that your ‘A’ game doesn’t play anymore. Your salad days now squeak in the bubble. But, you carry dignity better than the twenty something you could muddle. You see someone else looking back at you in the reflection you once thought you knew. You feel the aches and pains more than you ever did before. There’s still a spark in your eyes, there’s still coal in your soul. If they try and take it from you, dance like Fred or Ginger’s there beside you and watch them burn as you go.

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Date: 6/10/2022 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations you have made it to the age of wisdom. one thing I have noticed as I edge closer to 2024 and 70, it seems we have more things to carry with us when we leave the house and more things to forget than those still in the age of denial. I have also learned that a healthy diet helps one at any age to stay hopeful. Your poem should be written in letters ten feet tall and tattooed on the back of the hands of those making decisions about or for us old folk. Best regards David in NZ
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Date: 6/11/2022 3:09:00 AM
Hi David. Thanks very much for your comment. I totally agree and indeed do carry more with us and have more things to forget. Age is just a number but wisdom is earned with it. Best regards.

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