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Who I Am - Revised

Who I am - Revised Who I Am I am your prisoner of love bound to forgive you. I tried to escape but still I pursued you. Let's take pleasure in our youth and the freedom of truth. How easily my emotions gush out as I learn what love is about. And I'm on my knees as I beg you please. Love me too. I am bound to you. I have no pride. Be my bride. Hear my song. It's to you I belong. A Collaboration by: Collins Cp and Carole Duet

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2017 4:21:00 PM

wow, the woman proposing. We've come a long way, baby! This is a gem. Collins did a great job with you.

Carole Duet
Date: 5/31/2017 6:19:00 PM

Hi Andrea! I'm glad you liked the poem but the "woman" was not proposing in this poem. The guy was. I was just helping Collins with the poem. However, he informed me that he was not actually ready to propose to the woman he loved but he liked the poem. So, it's "just a poem". lol Carole

Carol B.

Date: 5/10/2017 5:41:00 PM

I really love this collaboration Carole. Raw emotions exposed in this piece. Loved it :)

Carole Duet
Date: 5/12/2017 2:06:00 PM

Thank you, Carol. Carole Duet

White Wolf

Date: 5/3/2017 11:10:00 PM

I nearly missed this little beauty! Excellent collab guys! 7+

Carole Duet
Date: 5/5/2017 3:25:00 PM

Thanks, Wolf!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 5/1/2017 8:14:00 PM

Very awesome amorous collaboration Carole and Collins; good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Carole Duet
Date: 5/2/2017 12:19:00 AM

Thank you Cheryl. Carole Duet

Becca Teagan

Date: 5/1/2017 9:00:00 AM

wow this is a lovely collaboration, I love the word-play.. very nice!

Carole Duet
Date: 5/1/2017 12:30:00 PM

Thank you, Becca. So glad you liked it. Carole Duet

Chris Green

Date: 5/1/2017 8:25:00 AM

Really nice collaboration. The message here of love and longing is strong and the stanzas are seamless between both poets. Nicely done Carole and Collins.

Carole Duet
Date: 5/1/2017 12:29:00 PM

Thanks, Chris. Glad you liked it. Carole