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Who I Am

10-21-12
You say I am kind to say those things But somehow I knew no words could help I am dying in this useless play of words The way I make you stand tall Is a lie I just wanted you by my side But you never knew me. . .never knew me I have written down the things I long to do To somehow get it through to you We are strangers in our own terrain I scorch in sun you freeze in rain Take a look The only thing left are the words They never tell you who I am. . .who I am So I wait here in the dark all alone Knowing somehow that I will never be enough I lack all that you are And all that you love I am so self-abhorred I wish I was kind enough to believe I’m something more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/31/2012 6:04:00 AM
I am so sorry it has taken me this long to get back to you on the comments you have left on my poetry. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment Laura. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:05:00 PM
What can I say? I love the way you write. :o)
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Date: 10/22/2012 10:56:00 PM
I love the way you wrote this,,,,, have a great day Laura ;}
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