Who Am I

come close and listen... in this moment of silence I am awareness

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/2/2023 4:55:00 PM

Love it. So much in so few! :)

P.M. Richter
Date: 12/1/2023 1:12:00 PM

Thank you Linda!!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/15/2023 6:07:00 PM

Dear P.M., a perfect, potent package of thought-provoking brevity. The Universe ripples under the influence of your profound pen. Warmest wishes, my friend, and happy new year.. ~Susan

P.M. Richter
Date: 2/5/2023 9:12:00 PM

Thank you, Susan! You have always been so kind. Sorry for the late reply - Happy New Year :)

Bill Baker

Date: 6/28/2022 7:05:00 AM

A FAV for my list, P.M. I've been there and done that. :-) I am awareness! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

P.M. Richter
Date: 7/2/2022 12:43:00 PM

Thanks Bill ~ I appreciate your comment/FAV. Have a wonderful Summer!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/19/2021 1:37:00 AM

Had to FAV, this is just wonderful.

P.M. Richter
Date: 1/31/2021 10:05:00 AM

Thank you Kiser :)

Joanna Feltham

Date: 1/1/2021 2:52:00 AM

Really powerful in just a few words. Congratulations on your winning placement.

P.M. Richter
Date: 1/1/2021 2:54:00 PM

Thanks Joanna ~ Happy New Year!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2020 9:46:00 AM

Sometimes we are so busy that we are not aware of our life, surroundings, etc. Congrats on your winner. Sara

P.M. Richter
Date: 1/1/2021 2:52:00 PM

Isn’t that the truth. Happy New Year Sara :)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 12/28/2020 8:57:00 AM

In silence there is awareness. Beautifully captured. Wishing you have a wonderful year of silence and awareness. Take care, Rama

P.M. Richter
Date: 12/28/2020 11:59:00 AM

Thank you Rama ~ I wish the same for you :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/28/2020 3:14:00 AM

Congrats! Likewise, cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, and Holiday Season while sharing "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

P.M. Richter
Date: 12/28/2020 11:34:00 AM

Merry Christmas Beata ~ thank you :)

Elaine George

Date: 12/4/2020 3:29:00 AM

BRILLIANT SENRYU, dear P.M. ~ Elaine

P.M. Richter
Date: 12/4/2020 6:10:00 AM

You are very kind ~ thanks Elaine!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/26/2020 7:52:00 PM

Gently and delicately done.

P.M. Richter
Date: 12/4/2020 6:18:00 AM

Thank you Caren! I always appreciate your deep understanding.