Who Am I

come close and listen...
in this moment of silence
I am awareness

i amsenryu

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Linda Alice Fowler

August 2, 2023 at 4:55 PM

Love it. So much in so few! :)

Paul Marc

December 1, 2023 at 1:12 PM

Thank you Linda!!!

Susan Ashley

January 15, 2023 at 6:07 PM

Dear P.M., a perfect, potent package of thought-provoking brevity. The Universe ripples under the influence of your profound pen. Warmest wishes, my friend, and happy new year.. ~Susan

Paul Marc

February 5, 2023 at 9:12 PM

Thank you, Susan! You have always been so kind. Sorry for the late reply - Happy New Year :)

Bill Baker

June 28, 2022 at 7:05 AM

A FAV for my list, P.M. I've been there and done that. :-) I am awareness! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Paul Marc

July 2, 2022 at 12:43 PM

Thanks Bill ~ I appreciate your comment/FAV. Have a wonderful Summer!

M. L. Kiser

January 19, 2021 at 1:37 AM

Had to FAV, this is just wonderful.

Paul Marc

January 31, 2021 at 10:05 AM

Thank you Kiser :)

Jo Chamberlain

January 1, 2021 at 2:52 AM

Really powerful in just a few words. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Paul Marc

January 1, 2021 at 2:54 PM

Thanks Joanna ~ Happy New Year!

Sara Kendrick

December 31, 2020 at 9:46 AM

Sometimes we are so busy that we are not aware of our life, surroundings, etc. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Paul Marc

January 1, 2021 at 2:52 PM

Isn’t that the truth. Happy New Year Sara :)

Rama Balasubramanian

December 28, 2020 at 8:57 AM

In silence there is awareness. Beautifully captured. Wishing you have a wonderful year of silence and awareness. Take care, Rama

Paul Marc

December 28, 2020 at 11:59 AM

Thank you Rama ~ I wish the same for you :)

Beata Agustin

December 28, 2020 at 3:14 AM

Congrats! Likewise, cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, and Holiday Season while sharing "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Paul Marc

December 28, 2020 at 11:34 AM

Merry Christmas Beata ~ thank you :)