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White Wedding

Confetti flutters the sky
A bride dressed in pearly white
Footprints pave bright virgin snow
Steps to her future

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Diane Locksley

Date: 1/18/2011 11:51:00 AM

Very beautiful. Congratulations on taking the first place. Best to you, Diane

deb radke

Date: 1/18/2011 5:16:00 AM

Oh, most beautiful! I love this. I have chosen this as a favorite. It is one of the best I have read. Congratulations. Love, Deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:36:00 PM

This is beathtaking, Eiken!! congratulations to you.

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 1/17/2011 4:49:00 PM

thankxxx Eiken for your encouragement and support luv.. so appreciated..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2011 4:36:00 PM

Congratulations..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/17/2011 3:33:00 PM

very provacative congrad's on this fine win! Light & Love

James Fraser

Date: 1/17/2011 2:47:00 PM

I can picture the whole splendid day before my eyes Eiken. Beautiful entry, and I can see why it was up there on the winners podium....:)

Stephen Parker

Date: 1/17/2011 2:35:00 PM

Foot prints in the 'virgin snow' aptly depicts the aspirations of a couple on their first wedding. Enjoyed your descriptive verse!

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/17/2011 2:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your lst place on this very fine Dodoitsu. REgards, Déirdre

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/17/2011 10:38:00 AM

lovely, congrats on your first place win

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/17/2011 10:09:00 AM

Go on woman. Write NO 1 at the bottom. Yepeeeeee. Eamon

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/17/2011 8:39:00 AM

OMG everyone, I was not able to be here during the weekend and have just logged on and found me as 1st in this contest. This is a first for me, thank you so very much. It was my first ever Dodoitsu, THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR YOUR KIND REMARKS:)))))

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 8:27:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Eiken sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/17/2011 3:13:00 AM

Hello M. What an honour it is to be mentioned in the same breath with as gifted a writer as you. Congratulations a thousand fold on your win. If you feel as delighted as me, it will be a great day for you, Eamon

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/16/2011 8:28:00 PM

Congratulations Eiken on your superb first place in John's contest ;-) WN

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/16/2011 8:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your great first place win. Way to go. Love, Joyce

Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick

Date: 1/16/2011 6:44:00 PM

Dear Eiken, So excited for you!! Congratulations on your incredible Ist Place win in John's Contest!! Enjoyed this!! Love, Annalise

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 1/16/2011 5:31:00 PM

congrats Eiken on your first place win luv in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu ... enjoy your top spot my friend.. u earned it..with luv..