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White Wedding

Confetti flutters the sky
A bride dressed in pearly white
Footprints pave bright virgin snow
Steps to her future

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Diane Locksley

January 18, 2011 at 11:51 AM

Very beautiful. Congratulations on taking the first place. Best to you, Diane

Deb Radke

January 18, 2011 at 5:16 AM

Oh, most beautiful! I love this. I have chosen this as a favorite. It is one of the best I have read. Congratulations. Love, Deb

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 7:36 PM

This is beathtaking, Eiken!! congratulations to you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 17, 2011 at 4:49 PM

thankxxx Eiken for your encouragement and support luv.. so appreciated..

Sara Kendrick

January 17, 2011 at 4:36 PM

Congratulations..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

January 17, 2011 at 3:33 PM

very provacative congrad's on this fine win! Light & Love

James Fraser

January 17, 2011 at 2:47 PM

I can picture the whole splendid day before my eyes Eiken. Beautiful entry, and I can see why it was up there on the winners podium....:)

Stephen Parker

January 17, 2011 at 2:35 PM

Foot prints in the 'virgin snow' aptly depicts the aspirations of a couple on their first wedding. Enjoyed your descriptive verse!

Deirdre Omaidin

January 17, 2011 at 2:15 PM

Congratulations on your lst place on this very fine Dodoitsu. REgards, Déirdre

Francine Roberts

January 17, 2011 at 10:38 AM

lovely, congrats on your first place win

Eamon Duffin

January 17, 2011 at 10:09 AM

Go on woman. Write NO 1 at the bottom. Yepeeeeee. Eamon

Eiken Laan

January 17, 2011 at 8:39 AM

OMG everyone, I was not able to be here during the weekend and have just logged on and found me as 1st in this contest. This is a first for me, thank you so very much. It was my first ever Dodoitsu, THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR YOUR KIND REMARKS:)))))

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 8:27 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Eiken sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin

January 17, 2011 at 3:13 AM

Hello M. What an honour it is to be mentioned in the same breath with as gifted a writer as you. Congratulations a thousand fold on your win. If you feel as delighted as me, it will be a great day for you, Eamon