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White Wedding

Confetti flutters the sky
A bride dressed in pearly white
Footprints pave bright virgin snow
Steps to her future

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/18/2011 11:51:00 AM
Very beautiful. Congratulations on taking the first place. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:16:00 AM
Oh, most beautiful! I love this. I have chosen this as a favorite. It is one of the best I have read. Congratulations. Love, Deb
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:36:00 PM
This is beathtaking, Eiken!! congratulations to you.
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:49:00 PM
thankxxx Eiken for your encouragement and support luv.. so appreciated..
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:33:00 PM
very provacative congrad's on this fine win! Light & Love
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:47:00 PM
I can picture the whole splendid day before my eyes Eiken. Beautiful entry, and I can see why it was up there on the winners podium....:)
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:35:00 PM
Foot prints in the 'virgin snow' aptly depicts the aspirations of a couple on their first wedding. Enjoyed your descriptive verse!
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your lst place on this very fine Dodoitsu. REgards, Déirdre
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Date: 1/17/2011 10:38:00 AM
lovely, congrats on your first place win
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Date: 1/17/2011 10:09:00 AM
Go on woman. Write NO 1 at the bottom. Yepeeeeee. Eamon
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:39:00 AM
OMG everyone, I was not able to be here during the weekend and have just logged on and found me as 1st in this contest. This is a first for me, thank you so very much. It was my first ever Dodoitsu, THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR YOUR KIND REMARKS:)))))
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Eiken sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:13:00 AM
Hello M. What an honour it is to be mentioned in the same breath with as gifted a writer as you. Congratulations a thousand fold on your win. If you feel as delighted as me, it will be a great day for you, Eamon
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:28:00 PM
Congratulations Eiken on your superb first place in John's contest ;-) WN
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your great first place win. Way to go. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/16/2011 6:44:00 PM
Dear Eiken, So excited for you!! Congratulations on your incredible Ist Place win in John's Contest!! Enjoyed this!! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/16/2011 5:31:00 PM
congrats Eiken on your first place win luv in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu ... enjoy your top spot my friend.. u earned it..with luv..
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Date: 1/16/2011 5:30:00 PM
whooo... bravo for the top win, eiken! :) really charning:) nette
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:25:00 PM
Oh Eiken Congratulations on this first place beautiful poem! So talented and I love it. As Always Shar
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your first-place win, Eiken! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:57:00 PM
Congratulations on the firstb place win the contest, Eiken
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:31:00 PM
Beautiful depiction of purity Eiken, Congratulations on your first place tie. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:30:00 PM
Congratulations for being at the top of the heap in the contest. This is a good one!
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Date: 1/15/2011 12:12:00 PM
Eiken, thanks for your support of my contests, it does not go unnoticed. Agape, Moses
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