White Snow

WHITE-- PURE, pristine is the sugar coat, that's heaped like a SILVER crown
WHITE-- Eggshell ice makes a cracking SOUND, where the lake is edged with BROWN
WHITE---While SCENT of morning air smells fresh,  ORANGE sun is overhead
WHITE---A TASTE of cream, in coffee, BLACK, before I grab the sled
WHITE--- I FEEL the warmth of friendship's GOLD, as we play once more in snow

(Pure, Silver, Sound, Brown, Scent, Pink, Taste, Black, Feel, Gold)


Mountaintops and valleys, are adorned with PURE white snow
The river sparkles SILVER, where strands of ice-cold water flows
Change came without a SOUND, as snow disguised the ground
to cover trees in velvet, leaving traces all around.
BROWN fence posts wear their new white hats, displaying with a flair
While hay bales seem like pillows, stacked, and snowbirds build their lair
Fresh SCENT of pine, is in the air, and frost is our breath
All familiar sights transformed,....to wear a different dress

We'll watch the ORANGE sun gently rise, upon new fallen snow
Reflecting rainbow satin jewels, wherever it may go
With a TASTE of winter at my door, I'm like a child again
Until the sky turns BLACK tonight, to urge me back indoors
I FEEL that child has surged through me......who never will grow old
The snow that came,  the peace it brings,.... worth more than pots of GOLD

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For The Contest: "Colors"  Sponsored by Tammy Reams
11/1/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hay Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 2:15 PM
Lovely! Congrats, Laura.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 6:49 AM
Perfect! Congratulations.
Negron Flores Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:47 PM
Excellent poem Carrie. Congratulations in your win.
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November 11, 2015 at 2:27 PM
Pure white has exceeded excellence again..Congrats!!! Sara
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November 11, 2015 at 9:47 AM
white winter gold, Carrie, every poem on this contest has been creative so far. But, here you are offering so much imagery to what's suppose to be a plain color. WOW, love it, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Lane Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Your write takes me back to the mountains. Congratulations, Carrie.
Reams Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:06 AM
Congrats on your win Carrie! This has a lot of imagery and all the colors and senses flow into a wonderful vision. Thank you for entering into my contest that was difficult.
Merryman Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Carrie, you are truly a gifted writer! This poem is magnificent! The imagery and flow of words are just stunning! Going in my favs! Love, KIm
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