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A white rose grew in her Summer garden. "Beautiful rose, I must beg your pardon. for I must clip you from your flower bed to enjoy your aroma in my home instead. In crystal vase the rose was fondly admired until its velvet petals withered and expired. June 8th, 2017

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Date: 7/12/2017 2:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beauty Lin! I love white roses and my husband just bought me a large bouquet of them tonight! : )
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Date: 7/16/2017 7:15:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. I once received a single white rose, edged in blush and it last for almost a month. I dried it and then crushed it and let it blow away in the wind.
Date: 7/4/2017 8:29:00 PM
A very beautiful write. Thanks for your entry and congratulations.
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Date: 7/16/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 7/4/2017 7:22:00 PM
Lovely write, Lin,congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 7/16/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 7/4/2017 4:14:00 PM
Back to say congratulations on your win, Peaches:) Shame to clip roses, however they are lovely:)
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Date: 7/16/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 7/4/2017 3:38:00 PM
This was my favourite poem that I read for the contest Lin, congrats on your win:-)hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/4/2017 3:43:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Your comments and others mean more to me than a placement in any contest.
Date: 7/4/2017 3:24:00 PM
How lovely! Congrats on your win, Lin! Janice
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Date: 7/4/2017 3:54:00 PM
Thank you, Janice.
Date: 6/11/2017 1:11:00 PM
- I'm glad I chose this poem on your list today, Lin - A pleasure to read this beauty, thanks - hugs // Anne-Lise :9
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Date: 7/4/2017 3:43:00 PM
You're always so kind. Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Date: 6/9/2017 5:30:00 AM
I keep coming back to read this gem so have added it to my faves now:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/10/2017 6:57:00 AM
That is a wonderful compliment to any author, Jan, so I thank you.
Date: 6/8/2017 7:00:00 PM
Such vivid imagery Lin I can almost smell the scent from here. What a beautiful flow to your poem I have never tried this form before:-) The picture compliments the poem perfectly!:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/10/2017 6:56:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Jan. I appreciate your thoughts. I searched quite a while for the right picture. This one was worth the effort.
Date: 6/8/2017 12:13:00 PM
Lovely Ms. Lin, best wishes...
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Date: 6/8/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Charlie.
Date: 6/8/2017 10:51:00 AM
...and a lovely flower like yourself only enhances the beauty of the bouquet:) Lovely poem, Peaches.
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Date: 6/8/2017 4:20:00 PM
Merci beaucoup, monsieur. Such kind and lovely comments are always welcome.
Date: 6/8/2017 10:14:00 AM
Very beautiful as is the flower Lin
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Date: 6/8/2017 10:21:00 AM
I appreciate your fine thoughts, Tim.
Date: 6/8/2017 9:52:00 AM
This is a pretty poem.
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Date: 6/8/2017 10:21:00 AM
Thanks, Dale.
Date: 6/8/2017 9:49:00 AM
There is nothing as delicate and lovely more than a white rose. (or your poem !)
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Date: 6/8/2017 10:21:00 AM
You're right, Carrie. It's a symbol of purity and assuredly it's beautiful. Thank you so much.
Date: 6/8/2017 9:37:00 AM
This was beautiful Lin. Truly a very lovely piece of writing. The form flows as if it were created for your words alone. Nicely done.
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Date: 6/8/2017 10:20:00 AM
Your remarks are also lovely, Chris. Thank you.
Date: 6/8/2017 9:31:00 AM
Oh how sweet and lovely. Beautiful Lin and good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 6/8/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thank you, Akkina, for your comments and well wishes.

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