White Out

A blizzard on the breeze- Yellowstone sows seeds

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Jane Bowen

Date: 4/4/2009 7:48:00 PM

Oooooohhh cool vision~ I enjoy your writing Brian...always it seems to soothe me some how? :) You've got a talent my friend...keep up the great work!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/3/2009 6:42:00 PM

This is really nice. Yellowstone is such a beautiful place with so many natural surprises and beautiful plants...probably from the blizzard breeze. What a genius!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/3/2009 12:46:00 AM

Brilliant flow and rhyming in so few words... great 'b' and 's' alliterations and 'breeze/seeds' assonance. Well done Brian! Best wishes, Keith

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/31/2009 5:02:00 PM

This is great imagery ..... I 've never been to yellstone, maybe some day we will get to see its beauty! nice write!

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/31/2009 6:49:00 AM

Love the images of this white-out!! Makes me think that those seeds are sowing a magnificent spring surprise! Yellowstone...another magical place we've camped (about froze!) but so beautiful!

John Rhinem

Date: 3/31/2009 5:55:00 AM

I have never been to Yellowstone~But I spent a winter in Yosemite! Yet, we never had any white outs....Although, it was/is very very lovely!:) I am trying to extract some sort of message from this write here dear Brian!? I suppose very easily that the blizzard, could blow seeds that would thence be sown underneath the snow pack! Hence, from death, springs forth new life!:) Smile~Am I close?~"Much Love To 'You & Yours, Always, John!:)

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/31/2009 5:44:00 AM

All tied together! Love this idea. Another completely different picture you paint so well in the same place! Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/31/2009 5:31:00 AM

Excellent lanterne, Brian. The imagery is stunning. The Northwest is being hit hard between the flooding and now this. Thank you for your kind words! Love, Robin

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/31/2009 5:26:00 AM

Love the theme of this morning. I love the way they all tie together and form a story. Great Writing Brian! Smiles from Lolita

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/31/2009 3:49:00 AM

There is alot going on in this short piece Brian..blizzard on the breeze..very nice....you are the poet with few words that speaks boldly..well done.