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White Moon

There was one midnight hour when I stood alone beyond my bed, in the shadowed room I was the child in the white flannel gown watching a white moth fly and a white moon rise The family slept..except for me They never heard creaks in the wooden floor or the squeak of the hinge on the old screen door I climbed down the steps into the fresh night air and was swallowed deep in the sequined sky Something was whispering, from beyond the hedge murmuring words, as a prayer, unsaid Yet, I knew it was cunning, I knew it was wise Temptation enticed me to follow the sound It spoke with the drum of the cricket's thunder I stood under the canopy of a million stars Without hesitation, or a fear, unknown Lit by the bleach of the crescent moon I knew in the moment, I was not alone The fragrance of jasmine, was caught in the breeze flying swift as a dove, to comfort me It picked me up, far off the grass Where I could see beyond the past Back in my room, tucked into the sheets Watching a white moth fly, and the white moon leave
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/20/2013 4:00:00 PM
This poem is wonderful and magical, and the imagery is almost dreamlike! I really enjoyed the read, Carrie! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
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Date: 11/18/2013 6:09:00 PM
Carrie, a nice wonder to get lost in.... ;) Congratulation, on your winning fantasy poem... Sending Smiles. *LINDA*
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Date: 11/18/2013 3:17:00 PM
Congrats Carrie ...Seren
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Date: 11/17/2013 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win, carrie
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Date: 11/17/2013 11:05:00 PM
oh my, mysteriously inviting, carrie...applause to you for a top wn!...:) huggs
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Date: 11/17/2013 9:13:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Carrie. Congrats!
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Date: 6/21/2012 3:54:00 PM
carrie, congrats on your win, loved it..David
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Date: 6/21/2012 3:09:00 PM
a lovely mysterious night! Light & Love
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Date: 6/20/2012 9:37:00 PM
Good to see this on a winners' list where it belongs. I finally got mine on the list too. Third time being the charm with this contest of Chris'. haha. You know, I was thinking I'd seen this before. But in checking below it looks like I must have been thinking of another of your moon poems. You do them so well, Carrie! Congrats.
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Date: 6/20/2012 12:23:00 PM
A beauty Carrie, congratulations on your win with this nostalgic write, love Wilma
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Date: 6/20/2012 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win!GREAT WRITE!
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Date: 6/20/2012 10:29:00 AM
You know what I love about your writes, Carrie? Is of how you beautifully capture nostalgia. Gosh, even if I didn't experience these things, you make me feel like I did. Always vividly written, and your words always flow. Super congrats on your win, dear Carrie! and I also am sorry for not having kept in touch-- I hope all is well with you and thanks so much for your wonderful and caring words in my poem. I will email you soon, my connection is sucky. Hugs to you :D!
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Date: 6/20/2012 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Chris' "A.gain" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2012 10:26:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem if it is for a contest it will do very well. xx Thanks for all your comments on my work I do appreciate them. The Titanic one was longer but too long to post. He is picked up by a ship but manages not ot give his name so he can disappearwhen he gets to NY xx
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Date: 4/11/2012 10:22:00 PM
Catie will love this. You just keep turning them out like ice cream. soup mail.
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