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White Girl's Love Poem

When I saw a white girl for the first time, I had butterflies in my stomach. But when I saw a white girl in person, I felt my heart beat. It seems that a beautiful white angel has appeared in my life unexpectedly. When I saw the beautiful face of a white girl, I knew that she would be the only one for me. My heart skips a beat every time I'm with a white girl. I always get an emotional feeling every time that I'm with her. She's the sun that lights up the Earth, she's the moon that rises at night, and she's the only shining star I see in the sky, even though it's hard to reach for. Her hair is so smooth and soft and her beauty and intuition are so powerful. I see this white girl as my best friend, my future girlfriend, my wife, and the mother of my children. When we get into a serious relationship, it'll be like two worlds coming together at once. And if this white girl had a nicer, gentle black guy like me in her life, she wouldn't have to worry about anymore of the drama going on or other bad things. I have real, emotional feelings for that girl. I can tell that she's sad and hurt. I can also tell that her heart is broken, and I'm willing to fix it. It also seems that when I get to be with her, then I'll make sure that her heart doesn't get broken and I'll make sure that I don't take her for granted. And when me and this white girl get together be this loving couple, then there's no turning back. I hope fate will keep us together forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/4/2011 6:05:00 AM
Why don't you try putting your words into stanzas, or follow a form? (See under resources "forms of poetry") This seems more like a rambling paragraph and it's harder to read.
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