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Poetry/Etheree/White Flakes Falling
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1707-375-16
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, February 16, 2025
For the contest, A New Etheree Poem, Any Theme
Sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 03/02/2025

Second Place

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When sleeping the snow came flying, swirling, big white flakes falling floating down silently to lay in deep depths to drift. In the morning it is dazzling, look at the scenes, oh, look at the scenes, and hear the winter birds chirping, tweeting.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2025 7:07:00 AM

Dropping by to say congratulations on your winning work. So nice to see it in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2025 3:23:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the complimet and congratulations, blessings ~

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/2/2025 6:15:00 AM

Constance, beautiful winter imagery in your poem, congratulations on your winning placement.

Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2025 4:33:00 PM

Tania, thank you for the contest and my placement and for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 3/2/2025 5:39:00 AM

A beautiful scene Constance and a nice Etheree. Congrats on your placement in the contest.

Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2025 4:33:00 PM

Oliver, thank you for thec compliment, comment, and congrats, blessings ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/17/2025 5:26:00 PM

So cool to wake up to snow, snow that was flying and swirling as we were sleeping and dreaming…lovely!

Constance La France
Date: 2/18/2025 8:44:00 AM

Kim, thank you for the compliment and comment, the snow storm is over now but it is still freezing outside and there is a lot of snow ~

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/17/2025 5:53:00 AM

Dear Constance, Your words are like a gentle snowfall itselfso soft, quiet, and absolutely mesmerizing. I love how you captured the wonder of waking up to a fresh blanket of snow. It felt like I was standing right there, taking it all in. Beautiful work! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2025 10:23:00 AM

Daniel, thank you for the wonderful comment, and compliment, blessings ~

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/17/2025 12:48:00 AM

I can see a wonderful snowfall in this poem.i enjoy the birds and descriptive words.

Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2025 10:23:00 AM

Hilda, thank you for the visit and comment, appreciate ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2025 12:14:00 PM

It's a beautiful serene scene indeed, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2025 10:24:00 AM

Andrea, thank you for the compliment ~