White Fire

white fire blue icy sunlight twinkles through clear sapphire gems ~ icicles white fire 1-1-21

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Fj Thomas

Date: 1/17/2021 1:03:00 PM

What a stunning sight that must be! Beautiful Sam.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/21/2021 1:02:00 PM

Thank you FJ! I hope you get to experience this "white fire" sometime. It is so memorable - a spark of light in the winter. Warm wishes to you!

Jcb Brul

Date: 1/13/2021 11:11:00 PM

white fire!! wow, what a unique description!!!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/21/2021 1:00:00 PM

In the mountains when sunlight reflects through icicles it is almost blinding. Thank you for your wonderful comments! They give me new fire! Hope you are well! Take care.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2021 3:27:00 PM

I can just picture it!! wonderful!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/7/2021 1:36:00 PM

Thank you my friend! Living so close to the mountains and especially in the snow zone I know you have experienced the "white fire" of winter. Your words are so encouraging knowing I have captured some of that fire in this haiku. Blessings!

John Watt

Date: 1/5/2021 11:35:00 AM

Bracing cold imagery in your wintry haiku, my friend. Don't get many icicles down here, but I'm going to put a sweater on after reading your lovely haiku! Enjoy your day ~ John

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/3/2021 8:08:00 PM

'blue sunlight/sapphire gems' - beautiful winter imagery, Sam! I don't get much snow where I live but I can imagine the snow and icicles from your descriptive talents - Happy 2021 to you and yours!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/2/2021 8:57:00 AM

Happy New Year my friend! Agreed! Sunlight through icicles is a blinding experience. Thank you for starting off my year with your uplifting message. Hope you had a great New Year's. Over Fork Over!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/2/2021 2:12:00 AM

Vivid image Sam, the light through the icicles is blinding. Over Fork Over and happy new year. Tom