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White Clouds

Several white clouds In the blue sky Looks like snow patches Stretching outwards

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Alfred Berggren

Date: 7/12/2017 7:54:00 PM

I often look for images in the clouds. It's wonderful what the imagination can see.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/13/2017 10:18:00 AM

Yes I always see something different in the clouds. I have always been a cloud watcher.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/17/2017 11:51:00 AM

This is perfect Darlene. I can see it ! :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/19/2017 2:15:00 PM

Hello Heidi, thank you. I always see it.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/17/2017 9:51:00 AM

Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/25/2017 8:31:00 AM

Thank you ,I always see different shapes in the clouds.The shapes always cchanges shapes.

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/13/2017 7:18:00 PM

Like it Darlene Clouds are what lie beyond the barriers stretching out in open patches of vacant canvas that morph into pictures we can only dream

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/15/2017 7:56:00 PM

I always see different shapes in the clouds.The shapes always changes.

Maria Williams

Date: 6/11/2017 7:43:00 AM

Lining those white clouds is a silver lining, and sun awaiting to appear, This could almost be turned into a Tanka...Maria

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/15/2017 7:57:00 PM

Yes it could, I did not think of that. Next time.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 6/7/2017 11:16:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene, for reading my poem addressed to the Lord. Snakes of any kind are not a favorite animal. Why they were created I am at a loss to give an intelligent answer. Enjoyed your poem on "White Clouds". BTW "Looks" should be "Look" as the subject in the first line is plural. Merci / M

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/8/2017 2:14:00 PM

Yes you are right look should be without the s at the end. Thank you for telling me.Please do not stop to write, I enjoy your poetry.

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/6/2017 4:32:00 PM

"White Cloud" reminds me of toilet paper.(lol) This is a short, but very descriptively sweet write.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/8/2017 2:16:00 PM

Hello Robert,Okay, that is a name of one brand of toilet paper. Yes this was a short descriptively poem. Thank you.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/3/2017 5:26:00 AM

Good Morning Darlene. The white clouds are the best clouds of them all. Your words and imagery are grand. May they be there always for one and all. Well done entirely. Enjoy the morning and day.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2017 3:34:00 PM

Lisa , thank you.Yes the white clouds are the best clouds.Yes the words are imagery. This is how I see the white clouds. I am enjoying the afternoon.