White

absence of colour
representing purity
look beneath surface
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/10/2019 7:15:00 PM
Hello Richard, the clour white goes with everything. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 6/28/2018 8:48:00 AM
Well executed Haiku- Enjoyed. Well done, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/29/2018 7:00:00 AM
Thanks Warren.
Date: 6/23/2018 4:01:00 AM
Made it a point to come read one of your short poems, Richard...and I am definitely not disappointed! It is worth looking beneath the top white layer. Regards // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2018 8:26:00 AM
So nice to have you visiting again Paul.
Date: 6/2/2018 10:23:00 AM
Exquisite! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/28/2018 7:00:00 AM
Amazing poem. White is my favorite shade. -JWE
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks JW
Date: 3/4/2018 9:24:00 PM
Hi Richard, i have found another Haiku that i have to save in my faves. This is a wonderful, deep write, an excellent Haiku. Your work goes from strength to strength Richard. The words ever run true. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/3/2018 8:53:00 PM
Hello Richard, I like your haiku. It speaks the truth. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/16/2018 9:03:00 AM
Very intriguing haiku, Richard. Wise words indeed in this depth of thought/simplicity of expression enlightening poem. Such understated beauty in this glittering poem. Love and joy always.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Freddie.
Date: 2/6/2018 12:14:00 PM
Damn str8!!! Search between the rust to discover that even surfaced beauty still gathers dust...no matter how much Lemon Pledge we use. ;)
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Date: 2/5/2018 6:40:00 PM
Simply enchanting!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2018 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 1/30/2018 8:07:00 AM
Indeed, Richard. Great Haiku. // Barry
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2018 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Barry.
Date: 1/30/2018 3:55:00 AM
Very true indeed Richard. A great Haiku.All that glitters is not gold comes to mind....Maria
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2018 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Maria.
Date: 1/27/2018 6:59:00 PM
An excellent Haiku Richard. What you see and what you get can be completely different.. Well done my wise friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2018 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Susan.
Date: 1/26/2018 12:27:00 PM
Yes. So much to this...caution is best
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2018 11:50:00 AM
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Date: 1/25/2018 9:26:00 PM
so true. Just because something appears to be pure on the surface, does not mean it's so. Well done, this.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Becca.
Date: 1/25/2018 1:50:00 AM
A fine, tiny cautionary tale, Richard. Look, indeed. Regards, Viv
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Viv
Date: 1/24/2018 8:58:00 PM
Clever indeed. Wonderful Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Shadow.
Date: 1/24/2018 6:32:00 PM
Clever haiku, Richard! Have you noticed all the all-white kitchens. Maybe they are to "fool" us?
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2018 11:52:00 AM
we went with light grey.
Date: 1/24/2018 10:45:00 AM
When i saw the title, i thought i wonder, what Richard will write for this. not disappointed last line is you to a T, brilliant.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2018 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Harry.
Date: 1/24/2018 9:07:00 AM
Short and powerful fine words. Regards Tom.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2018 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Tom.
Date: 1/24/2018 8:19:00 AM
Well said Richard..kudos!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2018 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Vijay.
Date: 1/24/2018 7:43:00 AM
Lovely!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/24/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 1/24/2018 7:38:00 AM
BRAVO Rick, so few words say so much:-) hugs Jan x
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/24/2018 7:43:00 AM
Thanks Jan.
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