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White So illustrious Giant flakes fall Down onto tree tops Sticking to the small branches Rows upon rows of trees dance the road Where the lane continues down Looking away I can't see The beauty shown Fog escapes me And leaving White Russell Sivey

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Date: 12/17/2015 4:25:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:14:00 AM
a lovely pen Russell just rain here so far I love white Christmas's such a delight to read this hugs 7
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Date: 12/17/2014 3:20:00 AM
really very beautifully crafted piece russell
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Date: 12/17/2014 12:11:00 AM
Beautiful imagery with a tinge of sadness...just like winter itself...I enjoyed your lovely poem tonight, Russell! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/16/2014 11:13:00 AM
so so beautiful Russell:-) love the imagery:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:40:00 AM
Snow masked by fog. The beauty of winter! well said!
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