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Whispers of the Wind

Written: September 03, 2023
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Wind-swept clouds above mountain snow
An ethereal dance in nature's flow
Majestic peaks, their heads held high,
Kissing the heavens, reaching for the sky

The reservoir, a tranquil oasis
Reflecting the beauty of nature's graces
Whispers of the heights cram the air.
The wind tells truths beyond compare.

A symphony of silence, a hushed melody,
In the stillness, the mountains speak softly.
Their voices carried on the breeze.
A timeless tale of ancient mysteries

The wind caresses the snow-capped peaks,
Whispering stories only the foothills speak.
Of battles fought and victories won,
Of the rising and setting of the sun.

The tarn glistens as a mirror, calm and serene.
A sanctuary for all who have been
The wind-swept clouds dance and swirl.
Creating a canvas, a masterpiece unfurled.

Whispers of the heights echo through the land.
As the wind whispers secrets, hand in hand.
Whispers of courage, whispers of hope,
Inspiring dreams with every gust and slope.

The mountains stand tall, guardians of time.
Their wisdom is etched in every jagged rime.
They watch over the world below.
Guiding us through life's ebb and flow.

Whispers of the heights, a gentle reminder,
In the warmth of nature, we may find a binder.
In the wind-swept clouds and mountain snow,
Lies are a beauty that only the heart truly knows.

So let us listen to the whispers from above.
And find peace and love in nature's divine grove.
In the whispers of the heights, we find ourselves.
Embracing the wonders that the world compels

In the wind-swept clouds and mountain snow,
A symphony of beauty and serenity flows.
So let us dance with the wind and let our spirits soar.
As we grasp the whispers of the heights forevermore.

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Sara Kendrick Date: 9/5/2023 12:44:00 PM Very descriptive and expressive with a touch of passion in these lines. Thanks for sharing them with us and for dropping by my page. You have made the mountains seem to be a most lovely place. Sara Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/5/2023 1:47:00 AM - Really a symphony of beauty a journey of passion, and every melody is timeless, Las - Beautifully written, thank you very much :) - hugs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/4/2023 2:19:00 PM You are so gifted. This really speaks to your gorgeous way with words, Sotto. Login to Reply

The Situation Date: 9/4/2023 9:38:00 AM Muse in total action. This reaches my top ten list and as i reach the end I try to make the scene. A married couple enjoying the serine. On vacation not saying a thing. Remembering the promises made to love and cling. Reminded of why they wear their rings. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/4/2023 7:53:00 AM Your poem is like an orchestra with its highs and lows, evoking great sentiments. A rhythm just like the falling rain, so sweet and melodious. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/4/2023 6:57:00 AM A symphony of silence, a hushed melody, In the stillness, the mountains speak softly. Their voices carried on the breeze. A timeless tale of ancient mysteries--I picked out just a few lines of this finely crafted poem, my friend. I hear the whispers you speak of, Lasaad. Login to Reply

Speaks Volumes Date: 9/3/2023 11:30:00 PM Whispers and a hushed melody, Lasaad your words are magical. The theme behind this wonderful verse, is beautiful. Another stunning creation. Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 9/3/2023 11:18:00 PM Can this poem be considered as fitting for the sense of sounds or listening? This is so profound the imagery and wordplay and also the way you’ve made it flow is so good . Got me inspired. I especially love “ so let us listen to the whispers above” yes in nature we find serenity and a sense of calmness . I can almost see those windswept clouds and mountwin snow. Love this Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 9/3/2023 10:18:00 PM "A symphony of silence, a hushed melody, In the stillness, the mountains speak softly. Their voices carried on the breeze. A timeless tale of ancient mysteries" I am taken to a mountainous terrain with snow resting on the high peaks overlooking a verdant plane where everything is so quiet except the soft whisper of the wind. Here is an extra terrestrial beauty which the heart alone can comprehend ! I feel I am trapped in a mysterious realm of heavenly beauty.So lovely dear friend . Login to Reply