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The vibrant tones of your tender voice Inspired me to cherish and rejoice, A wishful whisper undulating in the breeze Urging us to stay beneath the willow trees. Peacefully we listened to the water’s call, As a river frolicked over pebbles large and small. Alone we cradled in each other’s arms, Elated we kissed and tasted our loving charms.

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Date: 2/17/2022 2:24:00 AM
Besides the man and woman love locked, I also love the image of the river frolicking over pebbles !
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Date: 5/29/2021 11:04:00 AM
Very romantic write with great imagery.
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Date: 5/28/2021 4:00:00 AM
Good Morning Victor - The theme is perfect the scene is perfect and the love is perfect. All three elements are beautiful poetic elements. The rhyming was never forced. Thank you for sharing with us. Have a beautiful day Victor.
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Date: 5/26/2021 7:13:00 PM
Very nice, Victor, especially the last line, "Elated we kissed and tasted our loving charms."
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Date: 5/25/2021 11:19:00 AM
I enjoyed this sweet tale of charmed moments of lover's bliss at the river's edge. Beautifully written, Victor. :)
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Date: 5/25/2021 11:17:00 AM
WoW! Victor, You penned such a well written romantic write. Your poem and photo compliment each other very well. I enjoyed the read. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/25/2021 9:39:00 AM
So lovely and romantic Victor. Love it. The pic is perfect. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/25/2021 8:01:00 AM
Another romantic write... with great flow... Sorry Victor, I couldn't log in much of late... to read poems and comment... I wish to read more.. God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 5/25/2021 7:55:00 AM
Such a romantic masterpiece, your pen is so exciting writing about Love Victor, blessings and best wishes
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Date: 5/25/2021 5:29:00 AM
So romantic and beautiful. Wonderful write. Hugs
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Date: 5/25/2021 6:07:00 AM
I wish you could write more. I read your last poem and it was beautiful.
Date: 5/25/2021 5:12:00 AM
You write of love so beautiful, Victor, sometimes I wonder if such a love exists...
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Date: 5/25/2021 4:28:00 AM
Tenor of love resonates from hearts--beautiful poetry, Victor--I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 5/25/2021 4:16:00 AM
A lovely romantic cadence!
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Date: 5/25/2021 2:07:00 AM
A lovely romantic scene you've created Victor. Tom
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