Whispers of Jaguars

The cliffs up high
tell adobe tales
laced with maize
on hawk feather breezes.
Whispers of Jaguars
travel the mesquite,
are impaled on cacti needles.

The sight of the cat
knows the darkness,
protects the Gods.
It's said even the spots
on its fur are eyes;
they follow the warrior.
Spears cannot pierce its skin;
we sleep in peace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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O.J. Hunt Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Original, I love jaguars, apparently they are the toughest cat pound per pound. A great write Dale, wishing you well in the contest:-)
Cozart Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Thanks, Keith.
White Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 9:13 AM
simply beautiful, exactly what a Free Verse should be like."Even the spots on its fur are eyes", that imagery, it is a gem of a poem.
Cozart Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Thank you, Darren.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 8:07 PM
I think WW will enjoy! Good Luck in contest!
Green Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 5:13 PM
This is a great write for the contest. Best wishes.
Sands Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 5:02 PM
This is a neat one Dale. Good luck in the contest :)
Cozart Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 5:05 PM
Thanks, Heidi.
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