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Whispers of Jaguars

The cliffs up high tell adobe tales laced with maize on hawk feather breezes. Whispers of Jaguars travel the mesquite, are impaled on cacti needles. The sight of the cat knows the darkness, protects the Gods. It's said even the spots on its fur are eyes; they follow the warrior. Spears cannot pierce its skin; we sleep in peace.

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Date: 6/10/2017 1:06:00 PM
Original, I love jaguars, apparently they are the toughest cat pound per pound. A great write Dale, wishing you well in the contest:-)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/10/2017 1:13:00 PM
Thanks, Keith.
Date: 6/9/2017 9:13:00 AM
simply beautiful, exactly what a Free Verse should be like."Even the spots on its fur are eyes", that imagery, it is a gem of a poem.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/9/2017 9:35:00 AM
Thank you, Darren.
Date: 6/8/2017 8:07:00 PM
I think WW will enjoy! Good Luck in contest!
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Date: 6/8/2017 5:13:00 PM
This is a great write for the contest. Best wishes.
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Date: 6/8/2017 5:02:00 PM
This is a neat one Dale. Good luck in the contest :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/8/2017 5:05:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi.

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