Whispers In the Morning

Whispers in the morning
trying to find your way
listen to the bluebird
and what she has to say

The notes are soft and gentle
every one is played for you
the sounds of sweet ambrosia
her feelings ringing true

On painted limbs of sage brush
there's a stillness in the air
love beads are melting
and the bluebird disappear

Whispers in the morning
what once was there is gone
empty is the meadow
off has flown her song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 2:05 PM
The sound of the birds singing their morning song, is so pleasant to hear. I enjoy the morning songs of the birds. I have enjoyed your poem.
Canama Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 4:55 AM
How wonderful it is to be one with nature! This is an awe-inspiring poem! Congrats, Tim.
Rodd Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 10:36 PM
The title caught my eye. I'm so glad I stopped in to read it. Kudos!!
Wood Avatar
May 22, 2017 at 8:54 PM
Now this is really pretty. Well done!
Vaso Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 9:55 PM
I saw this got POTD, and well this is poetry at its finest! Well deserved!!!!
Bateman Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 3:47 PM
Hello Tim, Congrats on POTD!! Very well-done my good friend. I'm very much a fan of your rhymes. In four short stanzas, you've weaved an exquisitely beautiful and meaningful word picture. SEVEN/FAVE!! Best Always, Gary
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 12:40 AM
This is quite lovely Tim and deserving of POTD! Congratulations my friend! 7 ; )
Goff Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 9:23 PM
Sweet tune Tim!
Coreggia Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 8:39 PM
What a soft endearing poem that ends with beautiful notes of sadness:) Amitiés
B. Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 6:44 PM
So deserving of POTD! This made me sigh it's so beautiful yet sad. :)
Roper Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 6:30 PM
Another nice poem and the walk with nature, Tim, beautiful. ~*
Chaganti Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 6:27 PM
Fantastic read.. A very vivid image forms while reading the poem.. :) Congrats on poem of the day too..
Mccall Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 4:50 PM
What a beautiful poem Tim,well done and congrats on poem of the day. In to my favs it goes.
Andresen Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 4:45 PM
- Beautiful poem, Tim - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 12:26 PM
relishing this melody, tim...worthy of a potd!..huggs
Williams Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Tim. A great write but melancholy - I trust all is well ... Maria
Wood Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 10:59 AM
very nice Tim!
Wanter Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 10:54 AM
Oh, Tim, this is so touching. A fav, a 7
Smith Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 9:35 AM
A bit of sadness in the air Tim? Wonderful rhyme, hope all is well with you, congratulations for POTD honors...
Krampe Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 7:56 AM
A gentle morning poem to start my day - congrats on POTD.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 7:29 AM
What a wonderful poem to greet me this morning! Thank You and congratulations Tim :) xomo!
Downing  Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 7:24 AM
A touchy sad morning song Tim, but I hope she'll surprises you and sing softly her love song that your smile will be seen from afar. I bid you a great weekend and congrats on this beautifully written sweet yet sad song on Potd... Hugs :) Kina
Ricci Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 6:42 AM
Good Morning Once Again Mr. Tim. I am so happy for you and your entry. I just now turned to the POTD and learned your entry is it thus I had to return to leave another message. My message is this. My original words and review stand now and always. Congratulations for the entry is so well deserving. Have a wonderful morning.
May Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 6:15 AM
A beautiful morning melody Tim..Congrats on POTD
Ricci Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 5:55 AM
Good Morning Tim. My goodness. This entry and your words have touched me deeply. Poetry is all of the heart and soul and not to mention emotion. This one entry has all of that. I see read and feel such beauty. I can't tell you the meaning of your opening and yes your ending stanza. I so enjoyed the reflectiveness. May the bluebird reappear and find her way so we may follow her lead and find our way. This is marvelous poetry in the truest fashion. Enjoy the weekend. Well done entirely.
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