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Whispers In The Morning

Whispers in the morning
trying to find your way
listen to the bluebird
and what she has to say

The notes are soft and gentle
every one is played for you
the sounds of sweet ambrosia
her feelings ringing true

On painted limbs of sage brush
there's a stillness in the air
love beads are melting
and the bluebird disappear

Whispers in the morning
what once was there is gone
empty is the meadow
off has flown her song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/4/2017 2:05:00 PM
The sound of the birds singing their morning song, is so pleasant to hear. I enjoy the morning songs of the birds. I have enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 6/3/2017 4:55:00 AM
How wonderful it is to be one with nature! This is an awe-inspiring poem! Congrats, Tim.
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Date: 6/1/2017 10:36:00 PM
The title caught my eye. I'm so glad I stopped in to read it. Kudos!!
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Date: 5/22/2017 8:54:00 PM
Now this is really pretty. Well done!
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Date: 5/13/2017 9:55:00 PM
I saw this got POTD, and well this is poetry at its finest! Well deserved!!!!
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Date: 5/11/2017 3:47:00 PM
Hello Tim, Congrats on POTD!! Very well-done my good friend. I'm very much a fan of your rhymes. In four short stanzas, you've weaved an exquisitely beautiful and meaningful word picture. SEVEN/FAVE!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 5/8/2017 12:40:00 AM
This is quite lovely Tim and deserving of POTD! Congratulations my friend! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/7/2017 9:23:00 PM
Sweet tune Tim!
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Date: 5/7/2017 8:39:00 PM
What a soft endearing poem that ends with beautiful notes of sadness:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/7/2017 7:34:00 AM
Hi Tim , very enjoyable write soft and summery ,nice to meet , rate 7 :))))
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Date: 5/6/2017 7:28:00 PM
A soft and gentle poem with a touch of sadness which adds to it's beauty, you nailed it with the last two lines Tim and you deserved POTD.
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Date: 5/6/2017 6:44:00 PM
So deserving of POTD! This made me sigh it's so beautiful yet sad. :)
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Date: 5/6/2017 6:30:00 PM
Another nice poem and the walk with nature, Tim, beautiful. ~*
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Date: 5/6/2017 6:27:00 PM
Fantastic read.. A very vivid image forms while reading the poem.. :) Congrats on poem of the day too..
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Date: 5/6/2017 4:50:00 PM
What a beautiful poem Tim,well done and congrats on poem of the day. In to my favs it goes.
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Date: 5/6/2017 4:45:00 PM
- Beautiful poem, Tim - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/6/2017 12:26:00 PM
relishing this melody, tim...worthy of a potd!..huggs
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Date: 5/6/2017 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Tim. A great write but melancholy - I trust all is well ... Maria
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Date: 5/6/2017 10:59:00 AM
very nice Tim!
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Date: 5/6/2017 10:54:00 AM
Oh, Tim, this is so touching. A fav, a 7
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Date: 5/6/2017 9:35:00 AM
A bit of sadness in the air Tim? Wonderful rhyme, hope all is well with you, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 5/6/2017 7:56:00 AM
A gentle morning poem to start my day - congrats on POTD.
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Date: 5/6/2017 7:29:00 AM
What a wonderful poem to greet me this morning! Thank You and congratulations Tim :) xomo!
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Date: 5/6/2017 7:24:00 AM
A touchy sad morning song Tim, but I hope she'll surprises you and sing softly her love song that your smile will be seen from afar. I bid you a great weekend and congrats on this beautifully written sweet yet sad song on Potd... Hugs :) Kina
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Date: 5/6/2017 6:42:00 AM
Good Morning Once Again Mr. Tim. I am so happy for you and your entry. I just now turned to the POTD and learned your entry is it thus I had to return to leave another message. My message is this. My original words and review stand now and always. Congratulations for the entry is so well deserving. Have a wonderful morning.
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