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Whispers In the Distance

Whispers in the distance Whispers in the distance A wavering sort of sound Sifting through the twilight When no one is around Simple in distinction Comforting and free Touching every treetop Sent to you from me Neath a starlight shining Sunset on the hill True in its affection Upon your soul to fill Finding of its journey Hope to call my own Standing here this evening My heart is not alone Careful phrases chosen Thoughts provide the way No imagination Truthful words to say Wishes in the moonlight Spoken steady pace Heaven hears my promises Made tonight, this place Hear, for I have spoken A sentence bold and true The whispers in the distance Say that I love you Good night Soupers

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/27/2017 4:27:00 PM

Hi Chris!:)Very beautifully painted good night, romantic, sweet n' passionate love poem Chris!:) I truly enjoyed reading this one and so many others from you.A 7 +! A fav too.And thank a lot for sharing!:) For sure I'll return n' continue reading more of your very beautiful poems, my friend Chris:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:)) D.

Chris Green
Date: 4/27/2017 4:41:00 PM

Thank you so very much. I am happy you liked this one.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/14/2017 12:50:00 PM

I missed this beautiful poem Chris. I love it - A favorite. :)

John Hamilton

Date: 3/13/2017 6:52:00 PM

I'm sure the whole world will hear the whispers in the distance, fabulous writing, love your exquisite rhymes.

Mary Hoose

Date: 3/12/2017 9:00:00 PM

Ain't nothin' more sweet and romantic as the gentle whispers across the distance on a soft breeze from ones true love darlin' friend! Your beloveds heart will melt when she reads this lovely write I'm sure...A '7' for sure.Big country hugs and smiles to you my friend...Mary :)

Old Buck

Date: 3/10/2017 12:33:00 PM

Chris: I'm an old rhymer myself, but mine never sound this good. :o) I appreciate your sharing your stuff with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck

Chris Green
Date: 3/10/2017 12:35:00 PM

Thanks so much. I appreciate you stopping by to read and leaving such a nice comment for me.