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Whispers Flutter

In my mind your whispers mumble, and reminders of your deaths make me crumble; oh, I have tried to let go but often stumble. and now any death makes me humble ! Always inside my heart I hear you mutter, but my spirit and soul is so full of clutter; yet, I want to hold onto the words you utter, like they are fragile birds that flutter ! In the cemetery this day there is deep hush, and the scene before me is green and lush; today, God has used his best paintbrush, oh, listen to the sweet song of a thrush ! But, beloved family I am weary of this lament, please stop your whispers of torment; that leave me broken and my soul with a dent, oh, in my wandering mind your graves I frequent ! To stare, sigh and cry at your engraved stone, to bleed tears and weep all alone; now, I tell you that I am letting go in a moan, and turn away still hearing your pleading groan ! But, I must, must, must is my sigh, while your whispers and pleas fade and die; and above me is a perfect azure blue sky, and as I walk on- I am followed by a butterfly ! ________________________ July 15, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/Whispers Flutter Copyright Protected, ID 07-137-331-15 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Whispers sponsor, John Lawless, Judged 07/27/2021

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Date: 7/16/2021 1:32:00 AM
This is brilliant, Constance. A SURE winner. I absolutely love it. SO beautiful and emotive. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2021 8:57:00 AM
Gina, thank you so much for the compliment, I hope John loves it too ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/15/2021 10:18:00 AM
A heart touching write. Loved the way you rhymes each stanza. All the best for contest
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Constance La France
Date: 7/15/2021 10:51:00 AM
Rama, thanks for the comment and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/15/2021 9:22:00 AM
An exceptionally beautiful and poignant poem painted with the monorhyme brush and expressing deep sorry for the loss of a loved one. Fine, fine writing, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/15/2021 10:52:00 AM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliments on my poem, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

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