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Whispers

whispers sweet gentle being tread soft as eider down upon this weary heart. search quietly for nests of love between the cracks of ancient pain. perhaps, one phoenix flame exists among the ruins.

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Date: 11/2/2021 11:23:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much Patricia. Love the "phoenix flame". :) Linda
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Date: 8/4/2017 9:38:00 AM
A deep and delicate pen :)
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Date: 8/4/2017 4:33:00 AM
Hi Patricia , beautiful write , the phoenix will rise from the ashes , :))) hugs
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Date: 8/4/2017 1:48:00 AM
Superbly written dear, Patricia!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/4/2017 1:52:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios. You are very kind to have read my poem and commented.

Book: Shattered Sighs