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Whispers

A small cold room. An isolated cold room filled with nothing but whispers. The whispers that only let you hear and understand them at the most inappropriate times. The times where I feel just as cold as the room I am standing in. They feed off my hurt, and my tears. As long as those thoughts feed me, I’ll reluctantly continue to feed them. I try to leave. I crave to leave, and yet every time I grow weaker. The weaker I am, the less I fight, and the more the whispers eat and grow stronger. Will I ever get away and be warm in a large world? Or will I become just a cold, small whisper, alone in this room.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/6/2016 7:08:00 AM
Sounds so much like me
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Date: 4/3/2016 11:58:00 AM
Maggie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Maggie Thorne
Date: 4/3/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thank you very much. I really appreciate your kind words because I am so new to writing poetry I didn't start writing poetry until about six months ago. I am also new to this site any helpful tips would be great. I would love to have you follow me and give me thoughts about my poetry negative and positive I don't mind. I am lucky to find such a friendly person here

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