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Whispering Softly Winds

Eleven am half mast the moon smiling warmly three o clock sharing The sky with the sun good morning these eyes fill up with warm flooding tears Flooding rain down from deepest valley a blessing of pure beauty love Good morning sweetly lips sweeping golden kisses summer light of life Cool rising warmly before one's eyes a vision beholding beauty One deep dove moment in thought babe you flashed across this soul living free Pure living this dream memory forever takes hold off, one warm breath Sharing a vision looking into the sky so beautiful both so clear wow i thought love does really open the eyes wow again i am beginning to see everything so different purer in ways i never saw before

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2014 5:06:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your very expressive and passionate work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your presence was uplifting..Sara

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/15/2014 10:38:00 AM

thank you sara uplifting a smile wonderful comment dear friend i wrote this one for someone really special in my life

Vera Duggan

Date: 10/14/2014 6:54:00 PM

Liam what a beautifully expressed poem, I do love your poems as they are so easy to read and understand, it is great that you have love in your life it is wonderful isn't it, take care my friend..........Vera..........

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 7:10:00 PM

vera it took someone really special for me to see the beauty i never saw before deep and meaningful alone now i pray she finds the magic in love wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated bless you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/14/2014 3:50:00 PM

whispered with great beauty!!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 4:14:00 PM

thank you kindly andrea bless you dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/14/2014 1:01:00 PM

Pearls of beauty, dear friend, Liam!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 1:34:00 PM

in sadness pain or joy demetrios always a treasure wonderful comment dear friend bless you deeply appreciated

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/14/2014 12:59:00 PM

Awesome write my friend!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 1:31:00 PM

thank you ken dear pal dazzling comment heartfelt appreciated bless you dear friend

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/14/2014 11:52:00 AM

Liam . . . I enjoyed as always the touch of your golden pen in crafting such a meaningful and deeply emotional write here Mate!! A Big "7" here from me. Superb Write!! I will be ready to collaborate some more soon on some more writes. All The Best Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 12:20:00 PM

thank you deeply pal truly heart touching beautiful comment gary oh i have a few writes ready for you dear friend when you are ready pal smiling bless you pal

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/14/2014 11:15:00 AM

enjoyed your deeply emotional content on nature and how it is tied with love , liam.. huggs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 11:23:00 AM

ah thank you nette dear friend truly very beautiful comment bless you

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/14/2014 10:39:00 AM

The dove flies free and pure ,not anymore trapped by pain.The dove makes me think of being in peace with ourselves.The sky,the sun,the rain all through the deepest valley of our heart.So much comfort they bring,so your beautiful words.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 11:04:00 AM

charmaine i am at peace just a little troubled knowing in my heart something i believed in every thought to be real just shadows me i love everything in the world spiritually i house no hate or ill will to anyone wonderful comment dear pal you nearly had me going smiling spilling the beans

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/14/2014 7:33:00 AM

Awwww....you're in love. :) Liam...I'm happy for you. This is a lovely write. A breath of fresh air.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 11:09:00 AM

the beauty of a heart and soul you write how you feel within emotions eileen I always smile life's to short to harbor dark thoughts always best to love

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/14/2014 8:07:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your heart with me. I love reading your work...It is always positive and happy...and best of all ROMANTIC. I am well acquainted with pain and loss, Liam. It is great to be able to share the good and beauty despite it all.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 7:53:00 AM

in love with everything in life alone i am left with such a dream so happy these days sad in thoughts just sharing joy moments in life the moon and sun both showing their faces together first thought a deep love held inside wishing to share in a reflection of a soul beat wonderful comment eileen thank you deeply dear friend