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Whispered Phrases

Whispered Phrases (From the Original Poem: "Back to Heaven" posted 2/13/21) Falling off... falling off... the writing desk... the squawking perch... nights and days of falling off she and I remembering painted, whispered phrases-- this poet of surprising words, she's got me back to heaven-- pulling at my broken wings. New poem is old poem written backwards with lines in reverse for John Lawless Fragments of Verse Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/28/2021 7:55:00 AM
Lovely. Cant' quite figure out what you did but the product is unique and artful. Congratulations
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Date: 4/13/2021 9:27:00 PM
That's a clever idea. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/13/2021 7:12:00 AM
I think it reads more easily this way(IMHO) thanks for participating in the contest
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