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I heard my love whispering in a dream, his deep voice quivered, flickered and fluttered; from far off- and in my sleep I muttered, I recall us on the shore of a stream. I am fighting with the dream and screaming, as I feel his breath on my hair and lips; hear his intake of air and my heart skips, I can feel his love though I am dreaming. His whispered words tell me to come with him, my reply is timid and softly uttered; my words a stammer sputtered, and stuttered, and then I find myself in a place dim. Oh why, why did God take my one true love; and then let him come back to me a dove. ___________________________ September 15, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Whispered Love Copyright Protected, ID 20-1287-037-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Collaboration Constance La France and Line Gauthier Written for the contest, 'MAX 14 lines POEM-inspired prompt' sponsor, Line Gauthier Second Place

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Date: 10/13/2020 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. Dreams, some do come true and some are just dreams. Enjoy your win.......................
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Date: 10/12/2020 10:54:00 PM
Beautiful poem. 'My reply is timid and softly uttered'..... so well expressed how it feels in a dream. Congrats on your win. ~ Ani
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Constance La France
Date: 10/13/2020 8:24:00 AM
Ani, thank you for the compliment on my poem and the congrats _ Constance
Date: 10/12/2020 5:52:00 PM
“Whispered Love” is an awesome collaboration, beautifully worded. Congratulations on your win. Belle
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Constance La France
Date: 10/12/2020 6:03:00 PM
Belle, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 9/15/2020 12:20:00 PM
I like the way you expressed your dream...after all, it's but a dream...Well done
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Constance La France
Date: 9/17/2020 8:28:00 AM
Arturo, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate _Constance

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