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Whispered In the Night

under the glint of moonlight
by the sea in the veil of solitude
can it be we're more in tune
to the quiet murmur of our soul

can we better hear the whisper
of its longing and desire
divulging its deep dark secret
its most profound and fondest wish

under the solitude of moonlight
do we dare listen so intently
as to expose the hidden meaning
that would have us chasing our soul's dream



AP: 3rd place 2023, 3rd place 2023, Honorable Mention 2022

POTD December 26, 2022

Submitted on December 24, 2022 for contest OUR SOUL'S WISH LIST sponsored by UNSEEKING SEEKER  -  RANKED 1ST
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 9:07 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed the write/picture. Wish I was sitting there. Have A Merry/Happy/Healthy/Blessed New Year 2023....................
Gauthier Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Thank you very much, Paula ~ best wishes to you in the new year ~
Alex Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 8:30 PM
Great muse, indeed! Spiritually uplifting. Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj ~
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Very pretty, Line! …under the glint of moonlight… Congratulations on POTD!
Gauthier Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 4:12 PM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated ~
La France Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 9:26 AM
Line, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your wonderful win in Seeker's contest and on your Poem of the Day honor, well done and blessings
Gauthier Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 11:31 AM
Much appreciated, Constance. Thank you ~
Nicole Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 6:31 PM
This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Anything is possible. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Line, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Much appreciated ~ thank you very much, Brandy ~
Messina Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 6:14 PM
Stunning poetry, Line. Congratulations on POTD! Warmest wishes...wishing you and yours a very Happy & Healthy New Year!
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 6:37 PM
Thanks, Charles ~ All the best to you and yours ~
Gorelick Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 5:08 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Line! Solitude, reverie and introspection are sometimes difficult to come by until all the tumult begins to die down. A serene delight! Robert
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 6:37 PM
thanks for your lovely comment, Robert ~ so right ~
Ibeh Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 1:26 PM
Beautiful write as always, Line:-) Heartiest congratulations on POTD!
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 6:38 PM
Much appreciated, Edward ~ thanks
Doll Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 1:15 PM
Line, a Beautiful and very thoughtful poem. Congratulations on POID~ Warrem
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 6:38 PM
Thank you so much, Warren ~
Parker Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 1:12 PM
A delightful evocative piece, Line. POTD for sure! =;o]
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 6:38 PM
Thanks, Arlo ~ much appreciated
Ashley Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 11:32 AM
Dear Line, I am captured by the enchantment of your poem.. such intimate whisperings. So rich in soulful beauty. Congratulations for your poem being honored with POTD! Such a worthy choice for recognition. Warmest wishes for a happy new year, my friend.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 6:41 PM
Thanks for your lovely message, Susan. Most appreciated ~
Slaughter Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 10:50 AM
This is rather magical, Line, and a wonderful choice for POTD.
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 6:42 PM
Thanks, Jim. Most appreciated ~
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 10:26 AM
A serene feeling whispers throughout your soulful poem, Dear Line! Congratulations on the honour of POTD.
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 6:42 PM
Thank you very much, Malabika ~
Babcock Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 10:16 AM
Congrats on a very insightful write. Wishing you a yours a very blessed holiday season. love phyl
Anaya Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Line Gauthier! Altruistic makes for beautiful poetry Line. Poetry that begins with I and ends in me, makes no room for the we. How they expect to embrace what matters [OUR souls]. You've mastered the contest !
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:14 AM
Thank you very much, Anaya, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Delaney Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Congrats, Line…a wonderful POTD honor for you. Very mindful and insightful. SuZ
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:17 AM
Thank you very much, SuZ. Much appreciated ~
Goldsmith Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "WHISPERED IN THE NIGHT" is a wonderful write. Happy New Year 2023...............
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:06 AM
Thank you so much, Paula ~ All the best to you and yours ~
Fowler Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 7:30 AM
Lovely murmurations of the soul Line. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:06 AM
Thank you so much, Linda. Happy New Year ~
Eslinger Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 7:09 AM
Line! I cant begin to tell you how happpy i was when i saw your name pop up in a comment on my poem on Christmas Day! Such a gift! Now this lovely poem begins my Boxing Day! I feel true Love & a soft touch of mid-embrace of the soul in every line! Exquisite penning. A super 2023 for you! xox sally
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:07 AM
Thank you so much, Sally ~ most appreciated.
Seeker Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 6:32 AM
Ah ~ a POTD and I see it’s for my contest too! The cat is out of the bag, no matter! Warmest congratulations on POTD, Line and wish you a happy new year ahead!
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:07 AM
Such a lovely theme ~ I'm sure all the entries will be wonderful ~
Gentile Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 5:20 AM
Line, I love the felling expressed by your thoughtful words and i can totally relate! Congratulations on your POTD honors!! Enjoy your day xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:08 AM
Thank you so much, Mike. Happy holidays !
Edmonds  Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 4:31 AM
Wonderful Line, congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:08 AM
Thank you very much, Belle. Most appreciated.
Kitchin Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 4:22 AM
Line, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD!
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:05 AM
Much appreciated, Tania ~ have a lovely day
Kendrick Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 3:12 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. For some people I am sure that is the best time of day. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:18 AM
Thanks, Sara ~ much appreciated ~
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December 26, 2022 at 2:00 AM
At one with nature and soul, A special serene feeling were everything falls into place without uttering a single word, congratulations on your POTD Line, cheers David
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Thank you very much, David ~ happy holidays !
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