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When the sun is shining bright, we feel its warmth on our skin. And somehow, we are suddenly at peace; with our worries subconsciously on pause, our sensitive side basks in the moment. Breathing in a breath of air; reminds us that we're alive. Life is too short; we should pay attention; when time tugs on us with a gentle hand and shares the subtle splendors of nature. Forget life's complexities, they get simpler over time. Think back to the innocence of childhood, when youth was an unexplored adventure; and we looked forward to everything new. When a songbird starts to sing, its song warrants a response. But crushed by the weight of reality, we allot no time for the little things; yet death can instantly cut our stay short. We've only one life to live; best we live it while we can.

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Date: 3/23/2020 2:41:00 PM
Great wisdom with advice in this special First Place winning poem Emile. Congratulations! Stay safe. xxoo
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Date: 3/23/2020 3:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/23/2020 11:02:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your top win. So many lovely phrases and images woven into your poem.
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Date: 3/23/2020 3:35:00 PM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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