While I Sleep

I hear the wind howl While I slumber It is so soothing When I'm sleeping

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/19/2018 8:42:00 PM

My dear friend, this is something we have in common! For me too there is nothing more effective at bedtime than the soothing sound of the wind to lull me to sleep! So much said with just a few lines - beautifully done! Hugs. Pandita

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/26/2018 9:06:00 AM

Hello Pandita, yes the sound of the wind is soothing, i get to sleep faster. Thank you for your lovely comment, my friend. have a nice day.

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 2/13/2018 4:54:00 PM

Darlene, cute every so true somewhat funny!! thanks for sharing. Short Great write .James :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 7:50:00 AM

I meant the letter I. I will change that mistake. Thank you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 7:44:00 AM

Hello James, I am so glad you have enjoyed this poem and found humor in this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 2/11/2018 3:29:00 PM

You must sleep very lightly.. I don't know the world still exist . I sleep the death like sleep Christ mentions in association with death. Thoughts still well expressed and concise, bbn

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/11/2018 5:28:00 PM

Hello Barbara, nice to meet you. Sometimes I sleep soundly and sometimes I do not. I like the sound of the wind when it howls at night. Have a nice day my friend.

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/11/2018 9:22:00 AM

Somehow it is...Especially safe and tucked away indoors...Lovely poem...All the best Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/11/2018 10:52:00 AM

Hello Micheal, yes it would be the safe place to be.I like the sounds it mskes me fall asleep faster. have a nice day my frkiend.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 2/10/2018 9:29:00 PM

I LOVE howling winds...if the place shakes evening better. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/11/2018 8:01:00 AM

Hello Leanne, the howling wind is music to my ears,yes if it shakes even better. Have a nice day my friend.