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While Buds Drift

night touches wind, gold buds drifting off from laced hems in slow procession, while twirl of frothy breeze cloaks... my desolate autumn view. Contest: 4 or 5 LINE POEM

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 12/3/2017 10:29:00 PM

Congratulations on top placing, Nette! Well deserved...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2017 8:09:00 PM

So gorgeous, nette. Congrats on the number one win.

James Inman

Date: 12/1/2017 9:10:00 PM

Beautiful images Nette.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/1/2017 8:01:00 AM

I REALLY like this one, Nette--CONGRATS! Janice

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/1/2017 7:58:00 AM

I REALLY like this one, Nette--CONGRATS! Janice

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/1/2017 7:36:00 AM

A lovely image, Nette! Congratulations!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 10:58:00 AM

Nette, Congrats on your "Fragment Of Life" win. Luv ~LINDA~

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/9/2016 7:58:00 PM

Congrats, Nette: always a delight to read your poems. Hugs, SuZ

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/8/2016 10:21:00 PM

Delightful poetry nette.. congrats on big win!

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/8/2016 6:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Excellent imagery.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2016 3:35:00 PM

Beautiful, Nette. I sure do hope you have gotten my mail! Congrats on a fine win.

Carly Lalion

Date: 3/7/2016 11:36:00 AM

I hope to write as well as you. Congratulations to a fav poet!

Lu Loo

Date: 3/7/2016 8:26:00 AM

Nette, perfect for this contest and congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Eve Roper

Date: 3/3/2016 5:47:00 PM

Love the imagery you've painted with your beautiful words. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Daver Austin

Date: 2/28/2016 9:52:00 AM

Beauty in desolation. I also try to ease my gut feeling. Yes. This says something worth while. Love, daver

Elaine George

Date: 2/28/2016 9:25:00 AM

I see it so clearly, Nette. Sure to top Linda's list. Elaine

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/27/2016 9:29:00 PM

A brief but lovely view of autumn that takes me right back to my favorite season... Wonderful writing, Nette! Good luck in the contest!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/27/2016 9:34:00 AM

Exceptional tanka dear Nette. Have a great weekend.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/26/2016 9:56:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and beautiful Tanka! :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/26/2016 8:39:00 PM

Beautiful ... CayCay

Paul Callus

Date: 2/26/2016 3:49:00 PM

Poetically beautiful....great imagery accompanied by a slight vein of sadness. ~ Regards // paul

Norma Arana

Date: 2/26/2016 2:54:00 PM

Moved by this! The softness in the melancholic air of your eloquent poem is compelling!

Manny Paras

Date: 2/26/2016 1:24:00 PM

Impressed by the haunting glide of poetic feelings. A beauty to read you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/26/2016 11:56:00 AM

- ..... In silence I read .....and...... I enjoy reading ....... it is beautiful, Nette :) - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/26/2016 11:33:00 AM

Buds drifting off from laced hems....what imagery...it's beyond my ability to write like this. Lovely dear...Good luck