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Which Would You Choose

Number 1 unguarded moment a quick look up to your eyes~~~ unveiled passion shines Number 2 Encrypted in lines Poet's passion lies waiting~~~ My heart breaks the code Number 3 shirt reeks of perfume fragrance brings recollection~~~ secretary scent Eileen Manassian Ghali if you were a contest sponsor...which A-Ha moment would you choose? Any? This is not for Regina's Contest...feel free to comment.

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Eric Ashford

Date: 8/10/2019 10:33:00 AM

LOL I might be greedy and choose all three. All men are dogs (except me). Enjoyed this.

Ann Foster

Date: 8/5/2019 11:03:00 PM

I always love one, two is very inviting and interesting, three...betrayal...ah that one bites. Fun to consider. Great right. Ann

Georgia Kereopa

Date: 8/5/2019 4:13:00 PM

No 1, I’m romantic at heart and that feeling lingers forever

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 8/5/2019 1:42:00 PM

I would choose all three and wonder what you could offer for the rest of the week.............Maybe it's just greed. You have an amazing gift.

Donna Jones

Date: 8/8/2014 6:01:00 PM

Wow....all are exciting but I love #1...as this moment always happens when we meet the person we love

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/5/2014 7:49:00 AM

Being we are all choosing, my favorite is number two. These are the most fun I've had with reading only three lines. Loved all three, you are indeed a triple threat.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/5/2014 5:54:00 AM

I like #2 Aha as it pertains to decoding poetry, although #3 is also divine, dang Secretaries! I am still reeling from reading :"STAY" OoooH, I might visit that poem a hundred times today, Thank you for sharing! This too is a nice stack of A-HA's

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 6:15:00 AM

Thanks for reading, JS. I like the second one as well...though I've written a poem based on the first one. Unguarded looks when the true passion peers out are so stimulating.

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/4/2014 8:48:00 PM

No.2 is my choice...the soul is strongest here Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 6:17:00 AM

:) Glad you like it, Justin. So much is said between the lines. The more you get to know a person, the more you can understand the unspoken and the unwritten.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/4/2014 4:56:00 PM

I like passion so I choose number one...Looking at everyone eles's answers no wonder I never do well with contests with this type of poetry....I stay true to what I love...hugs Eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 6:19:00 AM

Stay true to what you love...it will stay true to you. Thanks for the visit. I'm very passionate as well...sometimes it is a cross to bear.

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/4/2014 4:27:00 PM

Number one sounds lovely Eileen..

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 6:22:00 AM

Yes...Thank you for your opinion, Ken. It seems number 3 is winning out...it's the saddest one of them all.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/4/2014 4:01:00 PM

Oh must admit i looked at the comments after reading them, but before writing this comment,,,and i like number 2 because it is sheer poetry, and i do see you in there, especially having read your wondrous poetry....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 6:23:00 AM

Harry...what a lovely post. You are so awesome. I'm so glad to get visits from you. You've been missed. Hugs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/4/2014 3:08:00 PM

Number three lady..I choose number three (That's me-pure female thinking : )..But they're all great Eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 6:24:00 AM

Thanks, my sweet. It seems to be the most favored one. It's not for the contest, but it sure had me going. Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2014 1:37:00 PM

Definitely number three.. secretary hired then fired if wife finds out LOL Great writes Eileen hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2014 6:25:00 AM

Well....sometimes wives can't do much about it and they turn a blind eye! Thanks for the comment, dear. Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/4/2014 11:59:00 AM

Eileen third one the best ,, it's witty n naughty as well,, Loved all ,, first one at no tie really passionate ,, Creativity shines my friend !

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/4/2014 12:01:00 PM

You bring me so much joy! Bless you! Sending you hugs.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/4/2014 10:57:00 AM

I think the third one gives the best shock value AHA moment. Ohh someone is being super naughty... I like that one the best :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/4/2014 10:59:00 AM

Thanks for your opinion, Cas. I appreciate the input here. I just got caught up with the contest theme....thought I'd give it a spin. Andrea's entry for this one is superb. She captured it gloriously. Give it a read if you haven't! :)