which side of the bed grows greener: Tanka Talk

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Poetic Form: Tanka
Inspired: 2024 February 22
Image: Grazing Behavior by Dairy Global

Grazing behaviour: Why knowing your cows counts - Dairy Global

cows stand in their beds trod on grass loosen like springs blades of grass enriched cows fulfilled and contented cows unfilled their content ... parts

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/23/2024 4:33:00 PM

unique poem...left me pondering

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/23/2024 8:06:00 PM

Short hint, Sara. Aloha, William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/23/2024 2:35:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Those are some lovely cows. Sara K

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/23/2024 2:51:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. Thought it might give a kick, and yours truly enjoined, my friend. Aloha. William

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/22/2024 12:06:00 PM

Hello Hilo Poet, An interesting topic. for the answer , i do not know. Aloha! /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2024 10:59:00 AM

Hello Helio Poet, Aloha! yes i agree. Mahalo Helio Poet. & Blessings. to you. ?Darlene/

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/22/2024 1:22:00 PM

Aloha, it is to know someone else's likes and dislikes/which side of the bread is buttered. Mahalo, Darlene, and blessings...