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Which Shoes

all my shoes are special to me
there is no favoriate choice you'll see
it all depends on what i'm wearing
am i working or comparing
walk not walking but a strut
nobody better mess with us



(For the Shoes  Contest)

funnylimerick

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/7/2011 10:30:00 PM

JOHN..CONGRATULATIONS ~ IN THE SHOE CONTEST... I THINK every title is aweome.. ;-) Have a wonderful NIGHT, GOD BLESS,..P.D.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/7/2011 1:04:00 PM

I see the platforms have strutted into the top ten...clicking, I'm just above on the 'nature's bounty' winners' list AND we both came in in fifth place :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/7/2011 9:04:00 AM

Congrats John on a wonderful win in the Shoes contest with this dynamic delight luv..

Ralph Taylor

Date: 11/7/2011 8:34:00 AM

Congrats, John. Excellent piece. Nice going. All the best. Ralph

Skat A

Date: 11/6/2011 10:37:00 PM

JOHN~ SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY~ CONGRATULATIONS!~ in my shoe contest~LUV*SKAT

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/27/2011 9:28:00 AM

This is a witty limerick John. I must run for I have to be at work in half an hour . Take care. phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/14/2011 1:24:00 PM

Good one for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed...Sara

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/14/2011 6:16:00 AM

Nice and witty Limerick you have penned here, James! Best of luck in the contest!...Gert ....And If I wouldn't have grown up with German I would never have learned it I guess!!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/13/2011 8:30:00 PM

Simple wording and rhyming make this work easy to read and understand.

The Situation

Date: 2/13/2011 4:32:00 PM

get down get down! get down get down! get down get down! get down get down!! T.S.

Constance La France

Date: 2/13/2011 3:03:00 PM

I love it, I image you are quite the "strutter" best of luck with this gem of a poem~~

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/13/2011 2:01:00 PM

haha hope the 70s platforms are in there somewhere...good entry and good luck :-)

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/13/2011 10:03:00 AM

i can hear the very rythem of the soles with this piece John.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/13/2011 9:33:00 AM

Fun poem, John. Best wishes in the shoes contest. I can just see you strutting in any of your favorite shoes! Love, Carolyn (Soup Mail returned)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2011 7:54:00 AM

oh ho, strutting shoes, like John Travolta at the beginning of his famous musical, where he struts to "I can tell by the Way you use your walk" (well, that probably isn't the title, but it's the first line that springs to my head) Fun one, john!