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Where You Went

Search of your thoughts Didn't find me there What I had to say You didn’t want to hear, When I offered a smile You held your frown Upon seeing me there You looked down, That's when I heard you But it wasn't my name Still, I told you I love you just the same, When I seized your eyes You looked the other way And I saw her there Where you went. April 30, 2018

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/27/2019 5:41:00 PM

Love hurts (reminds me of the 70s song by Nazareth.) especially when not reciprocated. ~ Regards // paul

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/9/2018 10:43:00 AM

Hi Vijay, such a sad little gem from your pen. Your words create a canvas that sings with sad emotion. Such sadness always sings within the heart. Your creativity shines again and again my friend. You always play the heart-stings so well. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Joseph May

Date: 5/3/2018 12:09:00 PM

the sadness of unrequited love...Nicely penned Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2018 3:23:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/2/2018 11:29:00 AM

Stay gracious, you have won love! A beauty that's your write! Stay bright Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/2/2018 3:03:00 PM

Thank you Besma.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/2/2018 2:06:00 AM

Excellent. So heartfelt write. Thanks for sharing it.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/2/2018 3:03:00 PM

Thank you Ravi.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/2/2018 1:37:00 AM

Love not returned is the saddest Love of all. Wonderful write Vijay....Maria

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/2/2018 3:02:00 PM

Thank you Maria.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2018 5:21:00 PM

I really like this, Vijay. Things are not always a two way street.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2018 5:54:00 PM

Thank you Andrea..appreciate your feedback, as always.

James Swartz

Date: 5/1/2018 4:54:00 PM

Very heartbreaking and honest feelings Vijay. A true poem of rejection. Great stuff as always.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2018 5:53:00 PM

Thank you James..glad to read your comments.

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/1/2018 4:01:00 PM

Stunning poetry.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2018 5:53:00 PM

Thank you harry.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/1/2018 3:52:00 PM

Very well expressed Vijay. It is nice to read your poetry again today. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2018 5:53:00 PM

Thank you Heidi..glad to see you back..appreciate your feedback, as always.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/1/2018 3:48:00 PM

Vijay, unrequited love stings, yet when those feelings form they linger long past a time of relinquishing them. But when you love someone unconditionally you want them to be happy which you so beautifully convey in this lovely poem. I can realate. ; )

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2018 5:52:00 PM

Thank you Connie..appreciate your thoughts and kind feedback.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/1/2018 10:30:00 AM

Vijay, so often we face obstacles in love. You have beautifully portrayed this. So heartfelt !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2018 5:51:00 PM

Thank you Mike..always happy to read your feedback.

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/1/2018 9:33:00 AM

Hello Vijay, This one is a said one. "Lost Love" is always a poignant theme worthy of continuous exploration. Like all circumstances of this nature, there are always situations and themes charged with emotions, sadness, and disappointment. Superb Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. Thanks for your recent comment on my poem "Tender Emotions." I posted another one today: "Deepest Memories and Thoughts." You might find it interesting too!!) All the best!! Cheers, Gary

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2018 5:16:00 PM

Thank you Gary..appreciate your comments..enjoyed reading your poem today.