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Where Tranquility's Quintessence Abides

I start my afternoon hike up a mountain trail. October’s sunlight, the vestige of Indian Summer, dapples my exposed skin with welcomed warmth. Sun’s rays are gilded tendrils cutting through pines whose needles’ sweet scent I breathe deeply in. I can almost taste the breeze as it rushes past, waltzing through the many trees. The sky, immersed in azure, is heavenly! I imagine its clouds having been swirled by the wind with which I wish I too were dancing. Bright foliage surrounds me. I am bedazzled by them as they ostensibly flaunt hues of scarlet, rich amber honey, russet, and tangerine - an ocean of windswept trees! My destination is a pristine lake where new trees shimmer - mirrored in its crystal blue. One oak is so tall it seems like a steeple reaching upward. Its limbs have formed an arbor which beautifies the view that greets my eyes. Acquiescing to enthrallment, I linger there where tranquility’s quintessence abides, inhaling October’s unique potpourri. Dusk will soon swallow up the day, so I begin my descent. Birds twitter; leaves whisper. Seeing me, a timid rabbit scampers behind a bush. Heaven seems fused with the terrain, igniting my world with iridescence as against a splash of persimmon, seagulls soar. How I would love to glide home like those glorious birds. Intoxicated by the rhapsody of colors, I come to the bottom of the trail with just enough time to reach my home’s comfort before night’s chill envelops all. Dec. 16, 2022 For Eve Roper's Still-Life Autumn Scene Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/29/2022 4:44:00 PM
Just beautiful, Andrea. So full of color. I especially loved, "heaven seems fused with the terrain, igniting my world with iridescence..." Congratulations on First!
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Date: 12/29/2022 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/story. I love your line, "Intoxicated by the rhapsody of colors," The pretty colors. Have a Blessed/Healthy/Great New Year 2023............
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Date: 12/28/2022 9:02:00 PM
Again, another beautiful work. Standing foremost first. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/28/2022 5:37:00 PM
Andrea, your poem was full of imagery, feeling, and sound; I was with you every step of the way. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you
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Date: 12/19/2022 2:53:00 AM
- An amazing poem, Andrea ... love it :) - You have already received the comments that I wanted to write ... I don't need to repeat - hugs
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Date: 12/19/2022 2:22:00 AM
A super poem Andrea, packed with amazing imagery, yet not overloaded, very difficult to strike the right balance in these type of free verse writes, like I’d know! but it works for me anyway, cheers David
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Date: 12/18/2022 9:12:00 PM
Lovely.... ! The scene you have painted is heavenly and I feel your internal contentment while descending down. This goes right into my FAVE.
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Date: 12/18/2022 5:32:00 PM
Your excellence took e to join you after just a line or two. I sincerely am so glad for your accomplished poet’s penning, for while docs won’t allow me to walk across my room at present, here in your lines, I completely hiked with you on a forest trail, touched by sun and radiant nature’s autumnal highlights. Bless you. Bless your pen. And Merry Christmas! sally
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Date: 12/18/2022 8:17:00 AM
Beautiful and poetic, your adventure has really been. You took me along with your detailed narration, depicting each stage and the magnificent scene you beheld with astounding clarity.
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Date: 12/18/2022 1:00:00 AM
I love this SO MUCH... I love your poetic view from the mountaintop: lakes, forests, multi-colored leaves, scampering wildlife, swirling clouds. Your phrasing is beautiful: "Sun’s rays are gilded tendrils cutting through pines", "Intoxicated by the rhapsody of colors", "an ocean of windswept trees", "Acquiescing to enthrallment, I linger there" to name but 4. I wish I had written this one! A FAV for me... Best wishes, my friend
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Date: 12/17/2022 8:48:00 PM
How nice- "I wish I were dancing." Such passion in this vivid poem. It takes me to a wonderful place.
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Date: 12/17/2022 8:01:00 AM
THAT TITLE....I had to stop and read to find out .... Where tranquility's Quintessence Abides......Beautifully done Andrea, and thanks for allowing me to join you on this walk.
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Date: 12/17/2022 7:45:00 AM
amazing, scenic and freeing, the wholeness of nature is new each time our journey interact with its many elements. It's lovely how vivid these imagery are, you transmit beauty in simple and interesting way. Nicely done Andrea.
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Date: 12/17/2022 1:59:00 AM
You took me there, every footstep, every enchanted vision you saw and brilliantly translated. Wonderful, poetic journey. thank you.
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Date: 12/17/2022 12:56:00 AM
Been there...in my dreams!! Lovely walk, AD. Contest winner prediction. =;o]
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Date: 12/16/2022 8:20:00 PM
Wow! This is brilliant, Andrea, what I have started writing is nothing good at all...
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