Where the Sweet Meet

Life like from a fish bowl, really!
Way ... encapsulated like above and behind, you know?
All those like gilded dado's of peachy-pink, gnarly puff, sweet aye?
All those awesome totally rad houses of
flannel-gray San Fran's Victorian Ladies, classic!

Life all sweet and wrapped in the ledges and overhangs, really!
Portcullis like totally frail, precious, half formed, clueless babes.
Really, half the town is like crazed!
Full of what-evers and dandy duds like newborns
each Lilliputian pop-up a sweet meat, smoked
stoked and toked inside their saccharin selves.

Life's a gay and grodie array of colorful buggers.
A,gag me with a spoon, side show of hard candy colored covers.
Really, like jujubes shaken from raspberry doors...
So take a chill pill, a coffee toffee, a licorice bit, a vanilla sucker
and get your most excellent self 
with your killer looks and like surprisingly soft center
to sweet Ole San Francisco's scene.

*internal line rhyme [not end rhyme ;)]
** 1980's Cal i forn i a English
Contest: Talk Like That
Sponsor:Craig Cornish
Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 6:04 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Talk That Way" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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February 24, 2012 at 9:14 PM
DEBBIE~CONGRATUALTIONS! With your wonderful win ONCE MORE... ;-)~ always*PD
Kearley Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 7:26 PM
The 80's..I forgot about all those dif words.Great job....Congrats :o)
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 7:06 PM
Yep, I sure remember this SCHWEET write. Congratulations, DEBS!!
Johnson Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 5:38 PM
I love this. Lots of fun. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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February 18, 2012 at 11:33 AM
Enjoy to reading yous poem today Debbie, have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Lu Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 8:06 AM
very unique. I love the way you twizzle around and wrote this one. made me smile. Cindy
Horne Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 2:21 PM
Enjoyed this clever piece, Debs. Just so pleased your biopsy result was good x
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 9:31 AM
hey, this is great, Debs. You did 80's like I did too!! I forgot to put the "like" inside mine. that was sure a popular thing to do back then and it lingers into THIS new century. Yep, you did a good job with this contest entry, even making it artsy!!
Poet Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 11:30 PM
Hi Debi to understand this poem I have to read it opening my dictionary.Best wishes for the contest:)
Cooper Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 6:30 PM
great write
Pettit Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 4:06 PM
Do you wear flowers in your hair when you go to San Francisco? I was there once, but never got past the airport. This is a colorful write.
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