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Come with me where wild roses bloom among weeds in a field of rocks and pebbles Each day will end with us holding hands at dusk gasping at the sight of a peach and violet sky I'll pin a rose behind your ear and kiss your lips as a soft breeze whistles a love song to the moon Our yester years will be forgotten then and we'll make wishes on all of our morrows

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Date: 1/3/2018 8:13:00 AM
Wow! Who wouldn't want to come with you, Lin!! great description:)
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/3/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thank you dear friend. Hugs for the comments.
Date: 12/31/2017 1:34:00 PM
Love has a way of making us forget the past and look forward to the future. Happy new year, Lin, best wishes for 2018. John
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Date: 1/3/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thanks for liking this one and your well wishes...they are returned to you, John.
Date: 12/30/2017 9:04:00 PM
A feast from the eye of a gardener and fantastic poet! FLOWERS ARE ONE OF THE MANY BEAUTIES THAT NATURE OFFERS AS ARE YOUR WORDS! A fav.....
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Date: 1/3/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thank you for your gentle words, Robert.
Date: 12/30/2017 8:24:00 PM
Lovely, dancing words Dear Lin, best wishes in the New Year...
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Date: 1/3/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Charlie.
Date: 12/30/2017 12:49:00 PM
Very beautiful Lin, so romantic
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Date: 12/30/2017 4:42:00 PM
Thank you, Tim.
Date: 12/30/2017 9:36:00 AM
I clicked anticipating beauty from your pen and I got it! Most lovERly, Lin. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 12/30/2017 9:53:00 AM
I'm so happy that you were not disappointed, CayCay. Thanks ever so much for the kind words.
Date: 12/30/2017 9:27:00 AM
What a beautiful romantic scene you set with such lovely imagery. I can just picture that stunning sky Lin. I love the scent of roses but don't like them as a flower I much prefer my orchids or carnations:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/30/2017 9:52:00 AM
Thank you so very much for the delightful comments, Jan. Roses are not my favorites either, but since they're most often associated with love I used them. I love tiny violets, sometimes called Johnny Jump Ups, and being from the South, magnolias, azaleas, and camellias.

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