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Where Memories Linger


When I was a little girl unaware of life and evil,
          Father would take me to the park with him;
I loved the ducks and how sweetly they floated there,
     Father would sit on a park bench watching me feeding them.

The ducks would come to me without hesitation,
          They knew nothing about evil or corruption;
Ugliness in the world did not exist in this peaceful park,
      It was so soothing beneath the trees to just sit and talk.

Oh, to go back to those days of the innocent child,
          Who would ask father question after question;
Under those swaying leaves and pretty ducks drifting by,
     He talked to me about life and nature on that park bench.

I went back to the park recently to visit the park bench,
          It still remains as I recall where me and father sat;
Lingering there I watched the ducks drifting and remembered,
     A gentle breeze touched my hair and I imaged it was father.
         
                    Sitting on the park bench with me . . . .

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February 13, 2016

Poetry/Verse/Where Memories Linger
Copyright Protected, ID 16-756-382-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym

Submitted to the contest, Any Poem #37
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Fiery Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 12:54 AM
Things were so different when we were kids...emotionally powerful...your name says'' Broken Wings"' but i strongly feel that your are one of the strongest woman I ever came across...7/7 Congratulation !
La France Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Red, thank you for that beautiful comment and for the congratulations and the double 7's !
Williams Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 12:30 AM
Sounds really peaceful. We should all have memories that beautiful. You're very fortunate to have that special of a father. Congratulations on your win.
La France Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Scott, thanks for the lovely comment and the congratulations, appreciate so much !
Warrior Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 11:05 PM
Congrats on win Wings...loving it...7 & 1/2
La France Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Winged, thanks for the congrats and love and the 7 !
Raven Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. The win is greatly deserved with this wonderful poetic gem. This is a touching poem, so gently written. Tears of the heart come forth as i read each wonderful line. Such excellent imagery Constance, the visions so clear in my mind. This is a seven and it goes into my faves....MIKE.
La France Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Mike, thanks for the congratulations, the seven and the fav and the great comment ~
Smith Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 1:14 PM
A touching victory for your gift, congratulations...
La France Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Charlie, thanks so much for the congratulations !
Mcclain Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 11:35 AM
Hi Broken Wings, Another remarkable poem that whisks the reader into a special private realm. Just stunning imagery and the metaphor of the ducks for purity and innocence is extraordinary. Oh, and congratulations on yet another win--trophy case gettin' crowded. Amazing. Cheers, Brian
La France Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 7:07 PM
Brian, thank you for the wonderful comment and congratulations ~
Davey Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Congrats on your win this is a very beautiful memory and it sounds like a wonderful park
La France Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Brian, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats, it is a real place Brian and the bench is still there...
A   Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Broken Wings, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 7:41 PM
Linda, thanks so much for the contest and for my win, appreciate
Eastman Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Beautiful... But memories are like that. And you captured them pertectly... Now I'll be testing my memories tonight...
La France Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Carol, thanks so much for the beautiful and the perfectly, appreciate !
Lariviere Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 2:37 PM
Beautiful
La France Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Etienne, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 2:11 PM
Beautiful memories Broken Wings - i wish i had memories like this of me and my dad:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 4:36 PM
Jan, thanks for the beautiful, my father is the reason I love nature, we enjoyed walking amongst the trees and thanks for the hugs....
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