Where Memories Keep Me Warm

My grandparents lived in a drafty old farmhouse,
yet, filled with a warmth, that came from the heart
and a hearth, where we hovered on cold winter nights. 
Days were much sunnier, the breezes were brisk, 
and the ritual of bedtime, meant taking a risk.

The bedrooms were poised on the back of the house
The heat could not travel the length or about
It took all of our courage when bedtime arrived
removing our layers, we must set aside.

An old fashioned bathroom,  and orange Lifebouy soap
cradled in wire, in racks by the sink
A claw footed tub, swallowed one's pride,
with water as cold, as the frost-bite outside.

My bed was a cot,  next to her sewing machine, 
Under the clock in the frosty, back room

Grams would come in for a minute, or two
long after sundown, and bedtime was due 
And although she was stiff, from old joints that would creak
She'd kneel down beside me so softly to speak
Holding my hand, and together, we'd pray
Thanking the Lord for the gifts of the day

A kiss on the forehead,...then off went the light
"Sleep tight, little one,...no worries tonight 
I prayed to the Lord that no bedbugs will bite"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Carber Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 8:28 AM
You evoked a great sense of place and time--the poem reminded me of my own grandmother--Len Carber
A  Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 1:44 AM
wonderful win
A   Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 1:07 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your Prayer time Memory win. LINDA
Allison Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 7:53 AM
sweet memories so beautifully penned - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Brown Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 6:42 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank Herrera's "Fondest Memory" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 11:12 PM
You make your memory world so real for all of us. Congratulations Carrie on awell rendered poem and a worthy win. Love, Joyce
K. Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 10:51 PM
Definitely enjoyed revisiting your grandparent's house, dear Carrie --enjoyed the homey atmosphere you brought here :) I remember this beautiful nostalgic write from before, love it! -- and so happy that this won again ^_^ Way to go for you and I'm sure that Christmas love lights up your home :) hugs to you-- nikko :)
Onclaud Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 10:24 PM
sweet remembrances, carrie.. a gem of glittering of beaded wordings… kudos for a well-deserved win!! i go whoo! :) huggs, nette
Mannan Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 8:43 PM
Such a touching and beautiful write Carrie. many congratulations for this win.
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 8:40 PM
I see you used an oldie too (except mine had not won the first time like your gem here did!) How wonderful to have these memories. I recall staying with relatives at their houses. I just loved it Congratulations, Carrie. LUv, Andrea
Horsman Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 8:20 PM
Wow Carrie, i swear to you this is an exact repetition of my stay at Grandma's, this is so wonderful. Congrats to you, and thank you for the memory. Harry
Devonshire Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 7:25 PM
The temperatures may have seemed cold, Carrie, but there was love-filled warmth in this old house. A beautiful poem from your gifted heart. Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Frank's contest. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 7:01 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved third place win in the contest of frank, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 6:50 PM
Congrats Carrie on your big win in the Fondest Memories contest with this superb write and entry .. another brilliant top ten win tonight with luv.. happy holidays...
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 3:00 PM
What a great bedtime memory, Carrie and congratulations on the winner circle. LUv, Andrea
Winter Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 11:38 AM
oh Carrie, you write so, so beautifully. I was there and I was that child. there is nothing as wondrous as the mind of a child and your imagery, inside and out, left me with chills - and not because of the cold LOL! congrats beautiful friend. and now you are making warm and magical memories for your own. love and hugs, shar xoxo.
Brown Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Your Snooze, You Choose". Love, Carol
K. Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 2:17 AM
Hi Carrie!! I really enjoyed this nostalgic trip to your Grandma's house--this narrative was just so vividly and beautifully told--wonderful memories indeed! --Congrats on being in my winners' list :) --nikko :)
Chircop Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 8:24 AM
sweet memories,sweet nostalgia--charma
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 5:23 PM
Now it's your turn to take me back. Thanks for a memory jarring write. My Grandma.s house is gone now. I took my Dad past the place my mom was raised. I slowed down and I heard him whisper God how I loved this place. I kept the tears hidden. God Bless. Vince
Lopez Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 9:22 AM
I have so many fond memories of my granparents home. I miss them dearly. thanks for sharing your memories .....alopez(have you received your medal yet?)
Strand Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 6:09 AM
Another great poem for your anthology Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for yourb welcome comments
Higgins Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 6:09 PM
You have brought me into your life again with a loving walk down memory lane.. you write so affectionately of things in the past.. your childhood sounded like a blast filled with love and security..beautiful writing.
Mckenzie Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 6:02 PM
Carrie ~Very sweet story about your grandma I have one of those tubs I guess people love them now! I can relate to the no heat in the room I have an Aunt that has a room with no heat in it! But there's nothing like the memories of the past ! Nice tribute to Grandma! Love Laura :)
Bingham Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 6:01 PM
Did we have the same grannies, that sounds a whole lot like my granny's house. Enjoyed this nostalgic write. God Bless. Ron
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