Where Luna Treads Premiere Contest Winner

Where Luna treads are silver threads, the wisps of clouds that slide

through sky of night, and shining white, they part so she might glide

serenely through dark twilight’s blue with slow and regal grace.

And to our world, with aspect pearled, she turns a beaming face.


posted 10/3/2020
For Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem #30 Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/13/2022 8:41:00 AM
Lovely, Andrea ~
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Date: 12/30/2021 10:01:00 AM
Your poem is so beautiful, Andrea ~ every line delicious. Congratulations on First Place!
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Date: 12/30/2021 7:08:00 AM
Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/9/2020 8:59:00 AM
Wah, congratulations on your well deserved win
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Date: 10/8/2020 9:59:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Enthused, I felt that I was a contestant in a poetry recitation contest while reading this aloud... God bless you.
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Date: 10/8/2020 5:40:00 PM
This is one of my favorites of yours. I love the imagery. A beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/8/2020 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your pen was writing/painting a beautiful write. Enjoy your wonderful win and day...........
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Date: 10/8/2020 9:02:00 AM
Congrats Andrea, I knew Greg would love this!
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Date: 10/8/2020 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea. Beautiful verse and a great win. Joyce
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Date: 10/8/2020 6:57:00 AM
Congrats on your winning inner rhyme stanza.
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Date: 10/8/2020 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your TOP WIN for this immensely great write!!
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Date: 10/8/2020 12:25:00 AM
Such a beautiful depiction of the scene, Andrea. No wonder this enthused Greg! Congratulations.
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Date: 10/8/2020 12:01:00 AM
Stunningly beautiful ~ just like Luna herself... Many congrats Andrea and a Fave for me ~ thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 10/7/2020 11:52:00 PM
What can I say, Andrea?? This is just plain gorgeous ... all the elements I look for done to perfection, and my favorite muse - you're getting so you know what I like! Big congratulations, my friend! :o) <3
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Date: 10/7/2020 11:47:00 PM
I had a good feeling about this one! Big congrats for your trophy win my friend.
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Date: 10/5/2020 3:26:00 PM
Excellent choice for Greg's contest, Andrea. Full of lovely nighttime imagery and pristine cadence and rhyme. Off to see the original now.
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Date: 10/4/2020 10:16:00 AM
I love this one Andrea, you use internal rhyme so well, it's one of my fave things that Greg writes, you were smart to enter this one in his contest, a sure winner. I gave up on these contests as I don't have many strong rhyming poems left. A fave for me, I love the moon and everything about this write!
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Date: 10/4/2020 10:07:00 AM
Gorgeous as you must be! xx
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Date: 10/4/2020 5:46:00 AM
Enjoyed the lovely tone of your poem, Andrea.
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Date: 10/4/2020 5:20:00 AM
- This is beautiful, Andrea - Good luck in the contest ... a top winning poem in my eyes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2020 4:39:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous...as only you can write, dear Andrea.
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Date: 10/3/2020 11:14:00 PM
gorgeous write! :)
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Date: 10/3/2020 10:19:00 PM
Another contest. You chose a fine stanza full of poetic imagery. It has the essence of fairies in it. I'm sure it will rate high. ~~
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