Premiere Contest WinnerWhere Luna Treads

Where Luna treads are silver threads, the wisps of clouds that slide

through sky of night, and shining white, they part so she might glide

serenely through dark twilight’s blue with slow and regal grace.

And to our world, with aspect pearled, she turns a beaming face.


posted 10/3/2020
For Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem #30 Poetry Contest
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Gauthier Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 8:41 AM
Lovely, Andrea ~
Peck Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 10:01 AM
Your poem is so beautiful, Andrea ~ every line delicious. Congratulations on First Place!
Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara
Zahid Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 8:59 AM
Wah, congratulations on your well deserved win
Agustin Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 9:59 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Enthused, I felt that I was a contestant in a poetry recitation contest while reading this aloud... God bless you.
Norton Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 5:40 PM
This is one of my favorites of yours. I love the imagery. A beautiful poem. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 9:19 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your pen was writing/painting a beautiful write. Enjoy your wonderful win and day...........
Hamilton Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Congrats Andrea, I knew Greg would love this!
Johnson Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 8:06 AM
Congratulations Andrea. Beautiful verse and a great win. Joyce
Logan Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Congrats on your winning inner rhyme stanza.
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 4:18 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your TOP WIN for this immensely great write!!
Watson Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 12:25 AM
Such a beautiful depiction of the scene, Andrea. No wonder this enthused Greg! Congratulations.
Gilmour Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 12:01 AM
Stunningly beautiful ~ just like Luna herself... Many congrats Andrea and a Fave for me ~ thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Barden Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 11:52 PM
What can I say, Andrea?? This is just plain gorgeous ... all the elements I look for done to perfection, and my favorite muse - you're getting so you know what I like! Big congratulations, my friend! :o) <3
Watt Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 11:47 PM
I had a good feeling about this one! Big congrats for your trophy win my friend.
Watt Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 3:26 PM
Excellent choice for Greg's contest, Andrea. Full of lovely nighttime imagery and pristine cadence and rhyme. Off to see the original now.
Hamilton Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 10:16 AM
I love this one Andrea, you use internal rhyme so well, it's one of my fave things that Greg writes, you were smart to enter this one in his contest, a sure winner. I gave up on these contests as I don't have many strong rhyming poems left. A fave for me, I love the moon and everything about this write!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 10:07 AM
Gorgeous as you must be! xx
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 5:46 AM
Enjoyed the lovely tone of your poem, Andrea.
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 5:20 AM
- This is beautiful, Andrea - Good luck in the contest ... a top winning poem in my eyes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
George   Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 4:39 AM
Absolutely gorgeous...as only you can write, dear Andrea.
Woodrow Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 11:14 PM
gorgeous write! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 10:19 PM
Another contest. You chose a fine stanza full of poetic imagery. It has the essence of fairies in it. I'm sure it will rate high. ~~
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