Where Loneliness Lives

In shoes with their laces untied, a picture frame with image faded,
in a hotel room whose guest is dust, a drawer, empty, but for rusted pins.
In the letter that you never reply to, the bin not emptied,
in a phoneline disconnected, a priest flockless - no sermon to utter.

You got up from the dinner table and told me to wash the dishes.
I put them in the sink but left them, neglected, and the memory
of you hardened, crusted. I told myself I’d scrub them when you

came back. Flakes float in greasy water like leaves aimless 
in a puddle, the suds lamely lapping at burnt leftovers - a 
tired ocean current feigning interest in destroying castles.

In a kettle without water boiled, a car seat with no belt,
an artist’s palette blank, a notebook with no impressions of thought.
The deaf person’s signing without hands, in the umbrella without ribs,
in calendars void of days, a clock with hands counting backwards, 

trapped in the amber of time. A mosquito caught in a tree’s sap.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/23/2020 6:48:00 PM
This is so creative and artistic. Congratulations on your win Thomas :)
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Date: 5/23/2020 1:00:00 PM
An amazing write Thomas worthy of a shared first place congrats again!
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Date: 4/29/2020 10:25:00 AM
So well written, congrats Thomas on a well deserved win!
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Date: 4/21/2020 11:34:00 AM
Fragmented, yes; but complete, yes too. Unanswered questions line our days, these days, with the message, Just wait. Marvellous, Thomas, irregardless of the placement; this shines.
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Date: 4/20/2020 6:53:00 PM
What amazing imagery. The loneliness bleeds from each line!! Congratulations on a well deserved win :)
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Date: 4/19/2020 10:31:00 AM
This is brilliantly written! Congrats on your well deserved win! Really enjoyed reading it!
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Date: 4/18/2020 8:59:00 PM
Fragmented, disconnected, and incomplete, deep musings of loneliness, my friend. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/18/2020 6:33:00 PM
All the images of disconnected pairs, unfinished business, decaying life, speak volumes of loneliness. The story in stanza two provides the pathos and gravity holding them all together. Truly powerful writing, Thomas. Awesome ending too. Congrats on your #1.
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Date: 4/18/2020 2:08:00 PM
So many vivid images Thomas. Powerful poem. Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 4/18/2020 12:42:00 PM
Excellent verse,Thomas.Congrats on the top win.
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Date: 4/8/2020 12:30:00 PM
Hello Thomas Harrison, yes this is loneliness. It is nice to meet you. Enjoy your day. Be safe my friend.
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