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7/18/02

In a tropical place, the climate
becomes a way of being.
Fruits and flowers on shirts and dresses,
breakfasts of bananas,
pineapple flavored passions of
afternoon, pathways to the moon on
evening seas, coconut-milk tipped waves at dawn,
palms tilting horizons and gulls gliding
the edge of time. 

Yet, where I live does not define me.

Not like the Irish dairymen, who
rain or shine, milk cows they
could easily set their clocks by.
 
Here on this perfect stretch of sand,
I am rootless - envious
of those who have never moved. 
I feel puppet-ized by modern life;
a little schizoid - liking where I am,
hearing the voices, while 
a part of me pines
for pastoral beginnings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/31/2021 7:06:00 AM
I can absolutely relate to this longing. A beautiful poem ~
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Date: 2/18/2017 9:43:00 AM
I've been blessed to have found something to love about every place I've lived. Never any place as exotic sounding as yours, but I was once told "home is where you hang your hat, embrace it" and find happiness. I try...
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/18/2017 11:16:00 AM
Me too, Charlie: ....and I have moved around quite a bit. I look for the best in people and seek out the quiet beauty around me. Have a wonderful weekend. SuZ
Date: 2/5/2017 7:31:00 PM
well, lady, if you feel rootless, I will gladly trade you this SNOW of Utah and take root in your lovely paradise. You are so lucky. And this is so GREAT!! SEVEN
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Date: 1/19/2017 12:12:00 PM
love your write yours two full of mood thank you for comments on mine happy new year to you to davidscottxx
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Date: 1/10/2017 10:15:00 AM
Always, I have dreamed of living such a life but this world got in my way. This fine poem, is as an ice cream cone on a hot, burning hot summer day to me.Adding to my fav list as it is a welcomed jewel.
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Date: 1/4/2017 5:54:00 AM
It must be marvelous the place you live dear, Suzanne! A wonderful poem artfully written!
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Date: 1/1/2017 11:41:00 PM
This is lovely SuZ. So nice to read your work again. I miss you. I wish you and hubby a beautiful new year! 7 ; )
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/2/2017 4:47:00 AM
Dear Connie: I miss you,too. I posted my LadyAutmn poem on PFT a coupe of weeks ago. First inspiration I had in ages. They say a change is as good as a holiday. Thanks always fo your beautiful encouragement. Love SuZ .......may your New Year bring, health and happiness.
Date: 1/1/2017 9:51:00 PM
a soulful write where a landscape shapes your essence and artwords!...happy new year dear suZ and more huggs
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Date: 1/2/2017 4:44:00 AM
Dear Nette: Always a joy to hear from you. May your New Year be wonderful in every way. Hugging you. SuZ
Date: 1/1/2017 4:52:00 PM
I live in my pastoral beginnings and I think I'm ready for a change. Sorta shuffle the cards, so to speak. When we have gold, we want silver. Love the poem SuZ. Happy New Year:)
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Date: 1/2/2017 4:43:00 AM
We just had a complete change moving from Hawaii to NC. The only regret is leaving friends behind but -hey- wev'e given them a new exciting place to come visit. LOL Happy New Year and thanks for reading and commenting. SuZ
Date: 1/1/2017 3:11:00 PM
Where do you live? It is kind of hard figuring it out in reading your poem. This is evocative and bittersweet work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/1/2017 3:37:00 PM
I wrote this when I lived on the Gold Coast in Queensland, Australia. It is like a tropical paradise there. My referral back to Ireland came from my visits there.Thanks for stopping by and commenting. A Happy New Year to you. SuZ
Date: 1/1/2017 8:45:00 AM
Oh my....what a beautiful mix of a Barrier Reef island and an Atlantic island Suz. You first took me back to those thousands of fruit bats that crossed Palm Island each evening against a pink sky. The sound of their wings overhead. Then, I was not even having to set my clock on a dark drizzly Irish night, knowing that beast of a rooster would be crowing at dawn.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/1/2017 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Jean: That is a nice area where she is. I used to cross the border there once a week for Jazz Piano lessons.
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Jean Murray
Date: 1/1/2017 8:48:00 AM
I will sent this poem to my older sister Teresa....forever longing for home from her home on the border between Queensland and NSW.
Date: 1/1/2017 8:22:00 AM
Lovely poem that speaks to me deeply. Happy New year, Suzanne.
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Date: 1/1/2017 3:47:00 PM
So nice of you to stop by and comment. All the best for 2017.
Date: 1/1/2017 8:06:00 AM
- Sounds like a paradise .... but you yearn to a different location .... great written Suz - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/1/2017 3:57:00 PM
Hi Anne - Lise:..... I have found it now. A place where I am at peace..mostly, and will be, more- so , after the renovations are finished. I hope your New Year is wonderful and kind to you. Hugs,
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