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Where Frozen Embers Still Burn

Where Frozen Embers Still Burn Canyons scorched over time by an overburdened sun lust A desolate lost soul still wonders blindly back On that past, the darkened prairie grass, and covered dust Where rain fell, love began, then turned icy black Confused, buried through time, recalling if you ever were mine Glimmers of gold discovered there that memories retain Scattered rocks, sharper than my mind, thoughts refined Landscape with solid features remains untainted in refrain Our love was silent born on golden morning’s mist Only a sad sun remembers everything that lasts Silence in the quiet open air recounts every little kiss Forgetting nothing in the embers of our souls that passed Cold winters ice etched us beyond simple lust Memory retains those golden laws of life divine Still keep their secrets silent born in trust Covers that distant morning when you were mine Entered Rhonda Johnson-Saunder's Poetry Contest on 12/23/14 "Your Best Romantic Poem of 2014" Original Post 8/18/14

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Date: 1/18/2015 12:57:00 AM
Truly romantic,congrats on the win my Earl...huggs
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Date: 1/18/2015 10:01:00 AM
Hi Kayod5, Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed my creation. I appreciate your kind words. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 1/17/2015 6:26:00 PM
Earl I am not at all surprised this poem did well. I really, really, really like it. There are images and lines in here that are brilliant. You are a great poet!!!!
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:32:00 PM
Hi Maurice, Thank you so much. Have a great week end. Earl
Date: 1/17/2015 2:45:00 PM
This is excellent Earl, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/17/2015 2:55:00 PM
Hi Maurice, Thank you. I'm surprised this made it in. It is not really fashioned for the fast paced world but I like it. I'm glad you enjoyed it too. Have a great week end. Earl
Date: 1/17/2015 1:01:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Earl:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/17/2015 2:50:00 PM
Hi Jan! Thank you so much. I hope you are having a wonderful week end. Earl
Date: 1/17/2015 4:44:00 AM
Congrats again for the win, Earl
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Date: 1/17/2015 2:57:00 PM
Hi Dr. Mehta. Thank you so much. I read your winning poem. It was very interesting. Congratulations to you too. Earl
Date: 8/29/2014 5:38:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win in the contest, Earl
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Date: 8/29/2014 9:26:00 AM
Good morning Dr. Mehta, Thank you and congratulations to you too on your fine win. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 8/28/2014 3:50:00 PM
Dear Earl, I love the way you weave in so many images of nature -- the winter ice, sad sun, and especially the "Canyons scorched over time." A beautiful writing style and a memorable tale of lost love. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2014 4:45:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Congratulations to you too on your win. You have a solid poem with sound merit. Take care. Earl
Date: 8/28/2014 3:27:00 PM
Favorite line...Only a sad sun remembers everything that lasts. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/28/2014 4:47:00 PM
Hi Faye, Thank you for your kind words. Congratulations to you too for your great poem and great win. Take care. Earl
Date: 8/18/2014 11:56:00 AM
Wonderful imagery:-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/18/2014 4:35:00 PM
Hi Jan! Thank you so much. I read your contest entry. It has merit. It is very sweet and romantic. Good luck to you too. I wish you well. Have a great day. Take care. Earl

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