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Where Do You Go To

I didn't see the road as I travelled my mind wrapped within itself elsewhere going nowhere

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Paige Hind

Date: 10/17/2023 5:41:00 PM

Wow, what a lot said in a few words, DD! It almost made me space out or something. You always make so much interesting poetry!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/17/2023 10:35:00 PM

Thank you Paige - I was just having a go at the Kimo form - I quite like it! I think the form causes a pause in thin air similar to drifting off in thought. Thank you for your comment x

Lin Lane

Date: 10/17/2023 3:19:00 PM

Daydreams often take us offroad. Happens to me more than I should admit.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/17/2023 10:34:00 PM

Thanks for your comment Lin, it is strange x

Sand Blown

Date: 10/17/2023 2:36:00 PM

...we're often everywhere but the 'now'... ...where-in....'time' mind-images be four/ five dimensional and we be just....some other....utensil in/of a 4d being of things .....stan

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/17/2023 2:43:00 PM

Thanks Stan - it's easy to get preoccupied. I appreciate your comment