Where Do Prayers Go

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July 30, 2017

~ First Place ~
Contest: August Standard
Sponsor: Brian Strand

Perfect in subconscious; sweetest swirl blend, orison body wrapped, stars ascend. Utopian plea rides winged horse divine to celestial chateau where halos shine, and my S o u l sings Hallelujah! Perfect in subconscious; sweetest swirl blend, imperfect in conscious; crave my soul’s mend. Society sublime, spirits sacred answer adoration, mercy's naked, and my H e a r t sings Hallelujah! Perfect in subconscious; sweetest swirl blend echo's answer does seventh heaven send. Blessings swaddled, bestowed in angel’s fleece my essence; vibrations in prayer and peace, and my V o i c e sings Hallelujah!

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L. J. Carber

Date: 12/28/2023 10:00:00 AM

A lyrical testament to the power and mystery of prayer! 'Nolo'

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/30/2023 9:06:00 AM

Dear Nolo, thank you for your gracious visit to an old poem that doesn't see the light of day unless kindness like yours touches upon it. Your esteemed thoughts are truly appreciated, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 10/27/2022 12:38:00 PM

Your eloquence is amazing. As for me, I know prayer was my greatest and sometimes my only ally.

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/28/2022 12:41:00 PM

Indeed, Vince, sometimes faith in prayer is all we have.. thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me in your beautiful and soulful comments. I appreciate your looking back to some of my older poems. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Robert Nehls

Date: 12/23/2017 10:14:00 AM

Hi Susan. I sing Hallelujah after reading this one. Very well written. Thanks for sharing.... Robert.

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/23/2017 11:22:00 AM

Thank you Robert for your lovely visit and beautiful comments. It delights me to know you enjoyed my poem and I so appreciate your precious thoughts.. Warmest holiday wishes to you and those dear to your heart! ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 12/7/2017 10:29:00 AM

Belated congratulations on placing first with this beautiful poem, Susan. May your prayers and inspirational words of praise rise high! ~ Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/7/2017 7:36:00 PM

Dear friend Paul, your congrats and precious sentiments serenely warms my heart and are greatly appreciated, as is your kindness, light and joy that is apparent in your spirit of your expressed words. Thank you and warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/12/2017 2:58:00 PM

I like this one, especially the last two lines...Hope all is well with you...

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/12/2017 6:34:00 PM

Hi my friend! All is well here, I hope all is well with you. Thank you for stopping by and leaving your warmhearted message. Your kindness and visits are always SO appreciated Arturo. I hope you have a wonderful evening :) Susan