Where Did My Soul Go

Where did she go? I wonder.
For she is nowhere about.
I think she stepped into a quagmire, our muse offers.
This does not seem plausible. 
A muddy, mucky, grayish quagmire, our muse says meanly.

Willing myself into a deep sleep, I am determined to regain my soul.
She is within my dream state, in twilight hour, slipping into the sea.
Rejuvenating and replenishing herself.
She comes up from the depth of the sea 
More vital than ever, energized and renewed.
Turning sixteen shades of delight, more joyful than ever.

Have we found her? Muse asks, in a whispery voice.
Already knowing the answer.
We have I say, and it is not a contest.
I love you both; you are yin and yang.
Let’s play!


Written: April 23, 2020
Contest: Slipping Soul Sunsets Into the Sea
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 8:58 AM
Very good, Caren, " it's not a contest" :) Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Krutsinger Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 5:53 AM
Thank you very much Eve. I appreciate it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 11:29 PM
I can fathom all the colors of the skies from your unique description Caren. A wonderful win. Congratulations! xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 8:52 PM
Thank you Connie. I appreciate it.
Mitra Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 10:29 PM
Oh lovely, a unique sunset poem
Krutsinger Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 8:53 PM
Thank you Debjani I appreciate it.
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April 26, 2020 at 9:21 PM
What an interesting interpretation of the contest!! I loved it ;) "Turning sixteen shades of delight " Fantastic line :) Congrats on your placement!!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 9:25 PM
Thank you Heather. I appreciate it.
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