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Where are you so soon, my love

Where are you so soon, my love
Like a summer night blown away
Where are you today, my love
Your face on my sleep sings all day

Your lips were unbroken honeycomb
My desire the humming bumble bee
For you, my distant pollen, ever I roam
Seeking you in sweet shadows of memory.

Shall we meet again ever, ere the sun
Sets forever on the howling bar
Shall you know I love you as I loved none,
My seeming lost and pole-less star.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/9/2009 12:34:00 PM
Awesome write here, L'nass ... reminiscent of a Browning age ... smile ... just excellence !!
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Date: 4/8/2009 5:59:00 PM
Ever so sweet and romantic
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Date: 4/8/2009 6:46:00 AM
you've captured this perfectly - never give up - that longing can take you places you can't imagine. Thank you for your thoughts on my poetry too - please keep writing.
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Date: 4/8/2009 12:21:00 AM
Such sweet love ... to ever behold such a love is truly something to treasure, your heart simply sings this one! Well done. Thanks for your welcome comments, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/7/2009 7:27:00 PM
wowser! you are on a holy roll! Light & Love
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Date: 4/7/2009 6:23:00 PM
Great write ,flowing into emotions from the heart.Read some of your words before ,always enjoy your eloquent way of placing words just right........Jim
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Date: 4/7/2009 5:49:00 PM
Thanks for the good vibes brother,, may you have some ROCK n ROLL in your journey!!
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Date: 4/7/2009 4:38:00 PM
Sooo beautiful, Shango! This reads like a poem from the British Romantic Period. And that last line is so awesome..."My seming lost and pole-less star." Brilliant work!!!
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Date: 4/7/2009 4:21:00 PM
Excellent write, I love it, thanks for the comments on mine too by the way, it was nice of you, keep writing....Aleera
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Date: 4/7/2009 1:55:00 PM
Interesting view on love with a creative slant. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/7/2009 1:12:00 PM
seeking you in sweet shadows of memories-love this verse and the poem is beautifully penned,straight from the heart-charma
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Date: 4/7/2009 11:56:00 AM
beauty in words
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Date: 4/7/2009 9:00:00 AM
L'nass - very beautiful poem that is so full of love and tenderness - Wonderful poem my friend - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/7/2009 8:51:00 AM
Like the kyrielle flavour to this tender love poem L'nass,one for my favourites I think.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/7/2009 8:39:00 AM
""BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBEAUTTTTTTTTTTIFUL''''' WRITE HERE....THANKS FOR ALL THE COMMENTS YOU GIVE ME ON MY POEMS AND THE UPLIFTING WORDS...GOOD DAY FRIEND-RHONDA KAY
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