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Where Are the Leaves

Where are the leaves, the leaves Wondered my guest They're gone now; they're gone now My reply void of zest I don't hear the robin, the robin The visitor now upset He's down south, down south now I said -- just a guess No flowers, no fragrant flowers The unhappy man lamented They're underground, underground I offered, unfounded Just then the stranger suddenly brightened "Well, that's early March for you" His mood now enlightened

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Date: 3/9/2020 4:18:00 PM
Perfect for this spring.
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Date: 3/5/2020 11:13:00 PM
A cleverly penned piece.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/6/2020 12:38:00 PM
I was actually gonna change this one, but now I think that I'll 'leave' it alone. Smiles, Gershon
Date: 3/5/2020 8:27:00 PM
Oh I love this, Gershon.. You are a lyrical, rhythmical, poetical master of rhyme! The echoing phrases are quite captivating, quite captivating, my dear friend. Beautiful poetry and a fav! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/5/2020 9:35:00 PM
And you are the kindest, warmest 'commentator' of them all! Thank you so, so much for your encouragement. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 3/5/2020 9:07:00 AM
I've never been a fan of 'March.' Everything is dead and dirty. But spring is just around the corner. Wonderful poem my friend. Have a great day.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/5/2020 7:01:00 PM
'March' should just March right into Spring ASAP. Thanks, David. ~ Gershon
Date: 3/4/2020 11:41:00 PM
Wonderful rhyme.. It is like a sweet song.. A flash of hope and brightness at the end.. Beautifully crafted..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/5/2020 7:00:00 PM
Can't ask for a better endorsement than you have given this one, Jenish. Thank you so much! Best always, Gershon
Date: 3/4/2020 10:12:00 PM
This is such a charming rhyme, Gershon. I think early March is the time of year when we all ask these kinds of questions. Blessings. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/5/2020 6:57:00 PM
---although... Early March is a lot milder in Chicago than it used to be, even 10 years ago. (I'll take it!). Thanks, Evelyn!

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