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When You Say You Love Me

When golden sun retreats in twilight of desire Sprinkling amber tinges on tangerine fire As galactic symphony opens the ceremony If you let me in, I know you like me Your neighborhood so bubbly and cuddly Happily I enter to meet you discreetly When hint of your blush caresses me softly If you close the door, I know you tease me Embracing each other the night feels lively Sending a message to heart's emissary As you respond kindly, touching me fondly If you shut the curtains, I know you want me The smile on your face so bright and lovely It lights up my life when I'm feeling lonely As you get ready to romance my evening Music to my ears, when you say you love me February 14, 2019 Placed first:End February 2019 contest by Brian Strand Placed 2nd:Music to my ears poetry contest by Silent One

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/28/2019 12:51:00 PM

Very romantic, Vijay. Congratulations on both your deserved wins. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/21/2019 7:30:00 AM

Thank you Paul--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/24/2019 7:57:00 PM

Congratulations once again Vijay!! As I have stated many times, your words belong soaring in the sky. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/21/2019 7:30:00 AM

Thank you Brandy..much appreciate, as always.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/20/2019 8:08:00 AM

Hi Vijay, A wonderful poem, and congrats on your 2nd placing - truly deserved. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2019 7:26:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2019 12:59:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:55:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/17/2019 7:31:00 AM

Music to my ears indeed. :) Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:55:00 PM

Thank you Brandy.

Carole Duet

Date: 2/16/2019 11:59:00 PM

Very lovely, Vijay. Romantic and uplifting...and congrats on your win! Carole :D

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:55:00 PM

Thank you Carole.

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/16/2019 3:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Vijay. Well done.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:54:00 PM

Thank you Line.

Elaine George

Date: 2/16/2019 3:18:00 PM

I knew this would be a great contender in this contest. Many congrats, dear Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:54:00 PM

Appreciate the return visit..many thanks, Elaine.

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/16/2019 10:34:00 AM

Just like the movies...really nice write..All the best Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:54:00 PM

Thank you Arturo.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/16/2019 9:03:00 AM

Congratulations for your great win Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:53:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Silent One

Date: 2/16/2019 8:34:00 AM

That is a brilliant first stanza with great imagery... Great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:53:00 PM

Thank you SO.

Charles Messina

Date: 2/16/2019 7:48:00 AM

Very romantic write, Vijay. There's a saying here in the U.S. "When a woman says no she really means yes (lol) Best wishes for a win. Have a nice weekend. Charlie

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:53:00 PM

Thank you Charles.

Elaine George

Date: 2/16/2019 4:23:00 AM

Those words...'I love you', when spoken in earnest...are the most powerful of all. Beautiful poem, my poetic friend. Elaine

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:52:00 PM

So true, Elaine..thank you my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2019 8:35:00 PM

a very romantic one. I see you posted on Valentine's day. Nice!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:51:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/15/2019 12:56:00 PM

verbal affirmation is surely music to the ear... what a melodious song, vijay from your spilled ink!...huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/15/2019 2:22:00 PM

Appreciate your kind feedback..many many thanks Nette.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/15/2019 8:30:00 AM

Lovely, appealing poem, Vijay! I like the way the action progresses. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/15/2019 2:21:00 PM

Many thanks Janice. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/15/2019 7:09:00 AM

Enchanting poetry that mesmerizes the heart with its melody my friend, Vijay! Excellently written!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/15/2019 7:43:00 AM

Appreciate and value your feedback, my friend. Many many thanks for your kind remarks.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 2/14/2019 10:58:00 PM

As always, Vijay, very visual and charming, with a cheery dash of mischief. Very good write.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/15/2019 7:39:00 AM

Yes..a bit of a tease and mischief. So glad to read your comments. Many thanks, Lawrence.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/14/2019 7:57:00 PM

A Valentine filled with romance Vijay. I so enjoyed reading this on Valentine's Day! I hope yours was a happy one! xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/15/2019 7:38:00 AM

We keep it low key..but happy! Hope you had a wonderful celebration of the day as well. Many thanks for your visit and kind remarks, Connie.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/14/2019 4:26:00 PM

"Music to my ears, when you say you love me" The melody of such, does leave the heart breathless. This is so beautifully romantic, and yes- so very inviting. Love whispers gently in the wind. Your thoughts always move me. Happy Valentine's Day Vijay. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/15/2019 7:36:00 AM

Hope you had a great Valentines day, Brandy. Glad to read your comments..very pleasant and uplifting, as always. Many many thanks, Brandy.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/14/2019 3:59:00 PM

I love how you wrote this, giving us a view from different angles. Well done Vijay! I hope it is a winner :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/15/2019 7:34:00 AM

Much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks, Heidi.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/14/2019 3:31:00 PM

Very Romantic Vijay, very appropriate for valentines day. Good luck in the contest. Tom.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/15/2019 7:34:00 AM

Thank you Tom. I appreciate and value your comments.